Strade's Jacket by amordantbaron

Strade's Jacket / amordantbaron

I don't even know where to begin with this one. Okay...

Excellent concept for a story. I felt like I was watching television through a jar of shaking marbles.

I liked the dithering neurotic style of the story, to a point. I think it went a little overboard with the identy crisis thing, beating a dead horse to use an overused term. It wrapped up nicely though.

My opinion, if you shortened it up a tad, cleaned up a little grammar and organized it a bit more formally, without loosing the avant-garde style, you'd have a gem.

Nickles worth...