Part one by Pippa

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Part one by Pippa

http://www.abctales.com/story/pippa/part-one
I'm a sucker for a proper story, and this has got that "what's going on here?" factor, as well as the "what's gonna happen next?" thing too. Dropped right in the action, I was hooked straight off, with enough explanation to keep me going but enough held back to make me want to read more. All in all a great start. Sharp and concise action scenes. no flowery bits.
Is this really called Part One? Or is it part one of another, bigger story? Hope there's more...

PS Sorry, I didn't see juliet's thread, I was buggering about with this one at the time.
what is they say about great minds think alike :) top story - have a read. Juliet

Juliet

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