Thanks so much for the comments! I've been meaning to write this for a while - pretty much ever since I put the last thing up on here - but it took a long time to get round to it. It's great to get feedback like this...hopefully I'll get round to writing some more stuff before too long.
I cherried it and then came here to flag it up - only to find it had already been spotted. If you read as much teenage angst as I do - I do read most of what's posted on this site - then you would welcome this with open arms.
Hurrah!
Juliet