Inspiration point

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Sun, 2007-08-05 08:15
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Jingle
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Inspiration point

I missed the last two inspiration point phrases so in my posting "Sally's Wedding" I have tried to combine them with this week's. Any comments?

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First of all here's the link: http://www.abctales.com/story/jingle/sallys-wedding-inspiration-point-s I like this. It's a story that says so much more than the words - and that's always a good sign. Well written, well constructed - but maybe it just needs a twist in the tail? I'm not sure. Your thoughts?
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Jingle
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Glad you liked it Tony and many thanks for the generous comment and of course the Cherries! The twist in the tail?...well I'll have a look to see what can be done.
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Glad you liked it Tony and many thanks for the generous comment and of course the Cherries! The twist in the tail?...well I'll have a look to see what can be done.
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