Gravel by barely black francis

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Tue, 2006-01-24 10:33

Tim writes with such force but this one has a wistful tenderness about it. Haven't we all been there? Haven't we all said these things to ourselves? But I've never seen it written down - especially with such style:

http://www.abctales.com/story/barely-black-francis/gravel

Tue, 2006-01-24 11:42

2Lou

But the spills away part wouldn't work with shards of glass, you can hold on to gravel (lightly) - I thought it was a perfectly balanced metaphor.

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Tue, 2006-01-24 17:41

tcook

Ah, but out of the mouths of babes and sucklings...

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