The Last Cashew Nut by Maisie

http://www.abctales.com/story/maisie/the-last-cashew-nut

Ok, taking on board the discussions re saying something a little more helpful than, yes liked this one...
I enjoyed this piece, particularly the miserable Anne character. Was just wondering, is there a way you could introduce the girl that Anne hits, earlier? I feel that, as it stands, the coincidence at the end seems a little too contrived to work. Maybe we could already know she's at the checkout from the outset. Hope this helps.

[Oh and is there any way that writers could be alerted to the fact that their stuff has been flagged? I know some of those who don't frequent the forums that often have sometimes missed comments.]