The Dissent by Lunajunk89

http://www.abctales.com/story/lunarjunk89/the-dissent

Firstly, dunno if it's meant to be descent or dissent. Wouldn't normally question it, but for the death subject

I know this poem could do with a couple of edits, just tighten it up a bit, but I like the idea and the turn of phrase in many instances.

In my own steamroller way, I'd personally end it after the 911 stanza, but that's just me.

Basic point is I liked the bones of it.
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