10 Obscure Lives by seannelson
Wed, 2006-05-17 19:48
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10 Obscure Lives by seannelson
http://www.abctales.com/story/seannelson/10-obscure-lives
Sean,
I really like your poem. I like the title and the idea of lives within one life. The unpretentious meditative gliding mood of the reverie 'sounds so Oriental. And I, like you, love your civilised elephants! And to round it off Hiroshima functions wonderfully as a full stop ' a final thought....
Chris