Yugen - Pete's ideas

These are the beginnings of a novel I am writing. It began life as a play, but due to a combination influence of Steinbeck and Kubrick's Dr Strangelove, I decided it might sit better as a novel, or novella if I don't make the word count...

The story is in my head, albeit jumbled and with gaps. I am determined to get it out.

This is just the beginning for now. Let me know what you think.

Thanks,

Pete

Yugen

First, we stop listening to each other; then we stop listening to ourselves. At the same time, we say more and more, but of the wrong thing and without waiting to hear a response.