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you cry, you die. chapter 7
Minutes later, he sat huddled in a dimly lit noodle shop, his mind racing. He kept replaying what had just happened, and Bronson’s final, dying word...
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you cry, you die. chapter 6
The evening air was thick with the heavy heat of Bangkok and the rich scent of street food frying lemongrass and garlic as Vic fell into an easy,...
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you cry, you die. chapter 5
The ceiling fan above the counter in the tea room turned in a slow, hypnotic rhythm, cutting through the thick Bangkok afternoon heat and stirring...
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you cry, you die. chapter 4
The humidity in the night market hung like a wet wool blanket. Neon signs bled neon pinks and sickly greens into the slick, rain-washed ground of...
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you cry, you die. chapter 3
The desktop fan sounded like a bag of spanners in a washing machine. It was doing fuck all against the soup hanging in the room—thick, humid Bangkok...
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You’ve done a wonderful job
Posted on Thu, 27 Aug 2026
You’ve done a wonderful job establishing a quirky, clever, puzzle-box atmosphere. The house feels like an extension of Werlyn’s eccentric mind. Details like the worn carpet pile, the rotary latch hidden as a coat peg, and the cluttered escritoire...
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hello
Posted on Sat, 22 Aug 2026
Yes, my friend, I was! Just to clarify, this is the prologue to an ongoing fictional story, not a true story. Chapter 1 will be coming your way soon, and I truly hope you'll stick around for the journey.
Read full commentTake care,
Stuart
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nice writing
Posted on Fri, 03 Apr 2026
hi friend
This is a haunting, evocative, and technically proficient piece of writing. The prose is rhythmic and the "math" metaphor is devastatingly effective.
Read full commentwell done. stuart please check out rise of the wild cats
Posted in V. The Dependents - Part Three
well done
Posted on Fri, 03 Apr 2026
Hi friend
Punctuation with Dialogue: In English, commas usually go inside the quotation marks, and you should use a comma to separate the dialogue from the "he said/she said."
Spelling & Typos
"no time to wasted...
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