Di_Hard
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I liked the raindrops/ticking
Posted on Tue, 02 Aug 2022
I liked the raindrops/ticking clock/flickering sepia film stills, all adding time up when the sun is not there to show its passing. How you make out that the past is dark to us, like the night
Read full commentPosted in Night Whispers
Good Gracious! You have come
Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2022
Good Gracious! You have come up with 2 stories while having covid!!!
Am so happy you have started another Willow's Tail, I love reading the characters :0) Agree with Airy, the catnappers have bitten off more than they can chew! Really look...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 1
Ah, so he is a thief, not a
Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2022
Ah, so he is a thief, not a spy? Won't his dog recognise him and give him away, if they are living so close?
Again, as with Wilow's Tail, your dialogue is such fun :0)
Read full commentPosted in "The Coffee House Spy" 3
Agree with Rhiannon, you
Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2022
Agree with Rhiannon, you really convey wildwaves crashing! I could picture the columns and the turbulence around them all through reading your poem
Read full commentPosted in Fingal's Cave
I do hope you can get it
Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2022
I do hope you can get it sorted out. In a way might even be better doing it online as once someone has talked you through how to mearure in the right places, you will always know
Read full commentPosted in M&S
What a good subject for the
Posted on Thu, 28 Jul 2022
What a good subject for the title :0) They really are like a curtain! I really like how you convey the speed of its growing with all the commas in the first part, then slow down for the growth of the hedge
Read full commentPosted in Competition
Ah, so glad you didn't stop
Posted on Wed, 27 Jul 2022
Ah, so glad you didn't stop writing these after all :0) are you seeing him now as an underdog? I hope that inspires you to keep going! I loved the idea of Brexit being in a box, but although she is not at all my favourite politician, how you...
Read full commentPosted in Boris and the Curious Case of Brexit
This was so interesting,
Posted on Wed, 27 Jul 2022
This was so interesting, flowing and easy in all parts except the bit about plastic, as if saying just with the rhythmn how plastic isn't part of the flow, the cycle, made me think of the beach where everything is beautiful and clean, except...
Read full commentPosted in Contour and wave.
So long as ABCTales exists,
Posted on Wed, 27 Jul 2022
So long as ABCTales exists, people will remember you and new people will discover you. We are the lucky ones to receive your comments
Read full commentPosted in Forget-Me-Not
That was a great ending, am
Posted on Fri, 08 Jul 2022
That was a great ending, am glad you took it that way. You really made the middle part of this one unsettling, and how she fulfilled her promise to help the shelter, that was clever
Read full commentPosted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part Three of Three)
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