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Well done! So glad you went
Posted on Wed, 13 Jul 2022
Well done! So glad you went back to this subject, have made their story known. You have wrapped such terrible tragedy in beauty, held their love safe forever
I really likerd "striated whispers" and the sense of the living, warm blooded present (children and dogs) within ancient much much more slowly changing shapes of stone,and also the more recent changes in Nature, with split trees and constantly...
Thankyou :0) You are so kind saying that, and also helpful saying which bits you liked - I wondered if I should take that bit out about the food i'll as it wasn't really part of the plot. Am glad you liked the mushroom bit, too - there was a...
Your way of writing, your spirit and sense of humour and warmth make me feel there is nothing, no fear a person cannot overcome if they treat them as you do. Chemo must be one of the most intimidating things we might have to take on in our life...
That is kind of your son to play, must be much better than listening to recorded music, and his grandmother must feel very proud, telling everyone who he is? And your grand daughter must have liked feeling so important, too :0) As Jenny says, a...
Well done! So glad you went
Posted on Wed, 13 Jul 2022
Well done! So glad you went back to this subject, have made their story known. You have wrapped such terrible tragedy in beauty, held their love safe forever
Read full commentPosted in (This Life) Part 9: Forever Pure
This has so many lovely lines
Posted on Fri, 15 Jul 2022
This has so many lovely lines and so wise Rhiannon it sounds like a modern Shakespeare :0)
Read full commentPosted in The Age of Discovery
I really likerd "striated
Posted on Fri, 15 Jul 2022
I really likerd "striated whispers" and the sense of the living, warm blooded present (children and dogs) within ancient much much more slowly changing shapes of stone,and also the more recent changes in Nature, with split trees and constantly...
Read full commentPosted in St Audrey's Bay Waterfall
"She told me to take a bag of
Posted on Thu, 14 Jul 2022
"She told me to take a bag of cocaine into Moose."
Are you writing all these stories at the same time???? Am full of admiration you keep track of so many characters in the one story!
Read full commentPosted in The Picture Ranch 63
Oh! This gave such a strong
Posted on Wed, 13 Jul 2022
Oh! This gave such a strong impression of thunder and lightning!
Read full commentPosted in Crack-Crack-Boom
Thankyou :0) You are so kind
Posted on Sun, 19 Jun 2022
Thankyou :0) You are so kind saying that, and also helpful saying which bits you liked - I wondered if I should take that bit out about the food i'll as it wasn't really part of the plot. Am glad you liked the mushroom bit, too - there was a...
Read full commentPosted in part 12
"chocolate-drp[ eyes "
Posted on Mon, 11 Jul 2022
"chocolate-drp[ eyes "
I thought Joyous had great dignity, her character worked well, for me
Posted in Smokescreen Chapter 5
How special! As Paul says, I
Posted on Mon, 11 Jul 2022
How special! As Paul says, I felt I was seeing the wren, too, you really conveyed the intimacy and wonder of this encounter
Read full commentPosted in Unexpected Guests
Your way of writing, your
Posted on Sat, 09 Jul 2022
Your way of writing, your spirit and sense of humour and warmth make me feel there is nothing, no fear a person cannot overcome if they treat them as you do. Chemo must be one of the most intimidating things we might have to take on in our life...
Read full commentPosted in Chemo 2
That is kind of your son to
Posted on Thu, 07 Jul 2022
That is kind of your son to play, must be much better than listening to recorded music, and his grandmother must feel very proud, telling everyone who he is? And your grand daughter must have liked feeling so important, too :0) As Jenny says, a...
Read full commentPosted in The Old and the Young
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