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I have 180 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1034926 times and 288 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2371 of my 6,676 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2481 votes

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They seem to me he most

Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024

They seem to me he most likely kind of bird for magicians to ride in, if they were to choose one to be, so was interested about that fairy bit. I loved

" we,

who are given wings and an emerald tail

over our blue dominion."...

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Posted in Pie

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What an imagination you have!

Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024

What an imagination you have! Your children are so lucky to have had your stories, I bet there was never any trouble getting them into bed :0) This one is wonderful, I love the bit about the dad, too. Really looking forward to the next part

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Posted in "Unwanted Magic" 1

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My favourite recipe book is

Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2024

My favourite recipe book is Vegetarian Dishes of the Middle East, by Arto der Haroutunian. I have never been to a Middle Eastern restaurant, let alone visited any countries there. But reading this book made me sure the people must be amazingly...

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Posted in The Iran - Tie Rack War

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I liked the ending too, about

Posted on Fri, 19 Jan 2024

I liked the ending too, about trust. The narrator trusts he will find happiness through the happiness of Atsuko. She is trusting the cat to guide her to happiness. If we are open to blessings they will find us.

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Posted in Enoshima (Part Two of Two)

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Oh! You are so clever!

Posted on Fri, 19 Jan 2024

Oh! You are so clever! Vanessa has gone from worrying if chocolate fingers will be bad for him, to being afraid he is filming her with his eyes. And now there is the daughter's encounter with Spencer to look forward to :0) Let alone the dinner...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 14

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Well, I am so grateful to

Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2024

Well, I am so grateful to experience them through your BRILLIANT accounts! What happened about you sending these off to travel publishers? I hope you have another go ?

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Posted in Lovely Palace, Must Fly

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I love all your descriptions

Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2024

I love all your descriptions of Tokyo! You evoke the sense of place really well, and the characters seem real, too.
not sure about this : "Her hair was as black as a raven’s"
looking forward to next part, though sounds like it will be...

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Posted in Enoshima (Part One of Two)

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These are so much fun to read

Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2024

These are so much fun to read :0) If only museum information cards were written like this! Am intrigued by the Rose Garden Palace - were there highly scented roses like those needed to make attar of roses? Do you remember what the gardens were...

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Posted in Lovely Palace, Must Fly

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soon after reading this,

Posted on Tue, 16 Jan 2024

soon after reading this, heard on the news about cloning rhesus monkeys so as to be able to do medical experiments on them, because they are physiologically very like us. On the chirpy bit they have at the end of the program. Wondering if Spencer...

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 13

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Wow! What an ending! Your

Posted on Tue, 16 Jan 2024

Wow! What an ending! Your story is so, so good

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Posted in Parcel for you...Part 13

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