Di_Hard
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I have 180 stories published in
2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 678421 times
and 287 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2015 of my 6,042 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2077 votes
This needs a bit of effort,
Posted on Fri, 24 Aug 2018
This needs a bit of effort, like opening a geode, then more and more bits start to sparkle
"snakes that lie in wait"
"To chase raw deliverance and
Shun the safety of the paved way"
"Both cowardly and brave
To...
Read full commentPosted in The Dirt Road
This is one of your
Posted on Sat, 25 Aug 2018
This is one of your alliteration masterpieces! Using the sounds and rhythm as a way to say the same thing as the words' meaning, it's so clever! I think this is one of my favourites of yours so far :0)
Read full commentPosted in Sharing
you have great skill making
Posted on Wed, 15 Aug 2018
you have great skill making lots of facts easy and enjoyable to read. I had no idea Norway had a potato famine.
I liked the way you mixed a wider history in with your family's history, too. And that you have been able to write something...
Read full commentPosted in The Shipping Line Clock
Great rhythm you have cought
Posted on Tue, 14 Aug 2018
Great rhythm you have cought the music of the storm and made it into words
Read full commentPosted in Storm
lots of good lines, what a
Posted on Sat, 11 Aug 2018
the first bit - what a way to describe how someone sounds!
also very much liked :
"Tonight grows older
than I can handle"
Read full commentPosted in I AM HOMELESS
gosh, the stress!
Posted on Mon, 23 Jul 2018
gosh, the stress!
Read full commentPosted in Saturday Part One.
Happy Birthday for September
Posted on Thu, 19 Jul 2018
Happy Birthday for September :0)
Read full commentPosted in DISCOVERY
this is beautiful all through
Posted on Thu, 19 Jul 2018
this is beautiful all through, no favourite bits, it's perfect
Read full commentPosted in DISCOVERY
That's a great, sensitive
Posted on Mon, 09 Jul 2018
That's a great, sensitive point of view. Thankyou for posting. I live here and am struggling to know how to handle this let alone write about it
Read full commentPosted in Be Careful What I Say.......
Brilliant choice. I like the
Posted on Wed, 13 Jun 2018
Brilliant choice. I like the rhymes, how they're not obvious, they sort of pull at you like light on moving water. As the poem is moving. To start with all I noticed was how beautiful the sound is. But the meaning is beautiful too when I read it...
Read full commentPosted in Mirror World
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