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I love these rhymes! It flows
Posted on Wed, 09 Oct 2019
I love these rhymes! It flows so well, the line endings are so smooth? It's what I am always aiming for when attempting to do rhyming and don't achieve :0)
Do you always remember the seed of writing, when you read it years later? It seems...
Read full commentPosted in That’s where I was when I wrote it down …!
Witloof! My Dad used to grow
Posted on Tue, 08 Oct 2019
Witloof! My Dad used to grow that in a cupboard. It would be all pale, like something Gollum might eat if he went veggie. I hope you are bringing the chestnuts home? Or is it too prickly for your dog? Mine used to get sore paws trying to see what...
Read full commentPosted in This October Brings Endings
Posted on Sat, 05 Oct 2019
Jaunty rhythm and custard coming at the end as if plonked on the table infront of an eager child, spoon at the ready
Read full commentPosted in Colours for Kids 11)
This is gorgeous, and coming
Posted on Sat, 05 Oct 2019
This is gorgeous, and coming after the last piece, inside and outside, remembering when you were free. I particilarly liked the turning off the tape to listen to the reeds. Filling your head with space before going back, like a diver takes a...
Read full commentPosted in Spurn Point
You have conjured the mystery
Posted on Fri, 04 Oct 2019
You have conjured the mystery and aloneness of hares very well, particularly liked
"until we were just secrets
of the field and heather."
Read full commentPosted in Hares
what a wise thought,
Posted on Wed, 02 Oct 2019
what a wise thought, combining the qualities in both jewel and flower - you describe the perfect partner!
Read full commentPosted in A jewel, a flower and a friend
Agree with you SO MUCH!!!
Posted on Wed, 02 Oct 2019
Agree with you SO MUCH!!!
There must be a zeitgeist psychology thing behind it, like the eyes wanting a rest from the brightness of adverts, or grey being seen as neutral therfore somehow less consumerist and better for climate change....
Read full commentPosted in Fifty Shades of Shade
well done thinking of a panda
Posted on Sat, 28 Sep 2019
well done thinking of a panda! And putting in about penguins having feathers, would make a child wonder about how they are so good at swimming, what sort of feathers they must be? And to go from a blank telly, having no meaning to the words of...
Read full commentPosted in Colours for Kids 10)
I like your dreamy rhythm
Posted on Sun, 22 Sep 2019
I like your dreamy rhythm very much. The "linger-lapse" is so beautiful, makes me think of leaf shadows and sunlight moving on the ground.
Read full commentPosted in light’s linger-lapse of time
I'm always on the look out
Posted on Thu, 19 Sep 2019
I'm always on the look out for stuff that helps with arthritis, do you have it? Have you tried tansy? It is interesting the Native American Indians used it for back pain, and also medieval herbalists here, yet now science says there is nothing to...
Read full commentPosted in Tanacetum vulgare
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