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you write of a friendlier
Posted on Thu, 18 Apr 2019
you write of a friendlier time. So much changed when supermarkets opened. I guess when supermarkets are all self service or home delivery today's children will remember the weekly shop there as a loss too, one more chance for human contact gone....
"... and good poets make it into something better, or at least something different.”
well, you are a good poet :0) This poem seems to me like a display cabinet where you have carefully curated lines by great writers to make the reader...
I love all the consonants at the beginning and the longer vowels and softer consonants at the end, wish I could write like this! I LOVE your musical ones :0)
Pansies are amazing, I remember trying to draw one once with my new pencils and just going through the paper in the end, trying to get the depth of colour :0)
You highlight how even now purple is special, compared to ubiquitous orange...
you write of a friendlier
Posted on Thu, 18 Apr 2019
you write of a friendlier time. So much changed when supermarkets opened. I guess when supermarkets are all self service or home delivery today's children will remember the weekly shop there as a loss too, one more chance for human contact gone....
Read full commentPosted in The Milkman
oh Rhiannon THIS IS GORGEOUS!
Posted on Sat, 20 Apr 2019
oh Rhiannon THIS IS GORGEOUS!!!
love "sudden spillage"
"dandelions' moment"
"escapes from farmer’s fields to anywhere"
you have caught the sense of wildness perfectly!
"but by the woods more in the shade, the...
Read full commentPosted in Golden Blast at the Roadside
"... and good poets make it
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019
"... and good poets make it into something better, or at least something different.”
well, you are a good poet :0) This poem seems to me like a display cabinet where you have carefully curated lines by great writers to make the reader...
Read full commentPosted in London's Burning
sounds like you are the true
Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2019
sounds like you are the true family, remembering him with beauty
Read full commentPosted in Crocuses in Spring
Elsie, so sorry to hear that!
Posted on Fri, 22 Mar 2019
Elsie, so sorry to hear that! Try writing on here? You will get so much support, so many of us have been through this
Read full commentPosted in Wild daffodils of field and meadow*
brilliant!!!
Posted on Fri, 05 Apr 2019
brilliant!!!
I love all the consonants at the beginning and the longer vowels and softer consonants at the end, wish I could write like this! I LOVE your musical ones :0)
Read full commentPosted in Unseasonal Hail!
loved this one!
Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2019
loved this one!
Read full commentPosted in Joy! Joy! Joy!
Pansies are amazing, I
Posted on Fri, 29 Mar 2019
Pansies are amazing, I remember trying to draw one once with my new pencils and just going through the paper in the end, trying to get the depth of colour :0)
You highlight how even now purple is special, compared to ubiquitous orange...
Read full commentPosted in Colours for Kids 7)
Posted on Sat, 30 Mar 2019
"I’ve got mine and he mustn’t touch.
We don’t like each other very much.
Although we have more or less the same,
I don’t want him to join in my game."
and
"and model soldiers all ready to die.
...
Read full commentPosted in BOOM or BUNCO
I hope things are better
Posted on Wed, 27 Mar 2019
I hope things are better soon and you get the job in which you shine and are appreciated and paid what you deserve
Read full commentPosted in Putting Things Off
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