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I have 180 stories published in
2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 684152 times
and 288 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2024 of my 6,062 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2086 votes
Really liked the bit about
Posted on Mon, 22 Jan 2024
Really liked the bit about Vanessa's clothes. Stu - am beginning to wonder if he might not be AI, too! One that escaped or was released and able to upgrade himself. How you describe the beef wellington conversation, I really felt for her....
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you...Part 15
Wow! As Jenny said, your
Posted on Tue, 23 Jan 2024
Wow! As Jenny said, your information about the inclusion of a place for other creatures in each building is fascinating! And it goes so well with this bit "Wherever I’ve been in the world I’ve always felt extremely fortunate to have originated...
Read full commentPosted in Razzmatazzed in Yaz’d
They seem to me he most
Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024
They seem to me he most likely kind of bird for magicians to ride in, if they were to choose one to be, so was interested about that fairy bit. I loved
" we,
who are given wings and an emerald tail
over our blue dominion."...
Read full commentPosted in Pie
What an imagination you have!
Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024
What an imagination you have! Your children are so lucky to have had your stories, I bet there was never any trouble getting them into bed :0) This one is wonderful, I love the bit about the dad, too. Really looking forward to the next part
Read full commentPosted in "Unwanted Magic" 1
My favourite recipe book is
Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2024
My favourite recipe book is Vegetarian Dishes of the Middle East, by Arto der Haroutunian. I have never been to a Middle Eastern restaurant, let alone visited any countries there. But reading this book made me sure the people must be amazingly...
Read full commentPosted in The Iran - Tie Rack War
I liked the ending too, about
Posted on Fri, 19 Jan 2024
I liked the ending too, about trust. The narrator trusts he will find happiness through the happiness of Atsuko. She is trusting the cat to guide her to happiness. If we are open to blessings they will find us.
Read full commentPosted in Enoshima (Part Two of Two)
Oh! You are so clever!
Posted on Fri, 19 Jan 2024
Oh! You are so clever! Vanessa has gone from worrying if chocolate fingers will be bad for him, to being afraid he is filming her with his eyes. And now there is the daughter's encounter with Spencer to look forward to :0) Let alone the dinner...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you...Part 14
Well, I am so grateful to
Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2024
Well, I am so grateful to experience them through your BRILLIANT accounts! What happened about you sending these off to travel publishers? I hope you have another go ?
Read full commentPosted in Lovely Palace, Must Fly
I love all your descriptions
Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2024
I love all your descriptions of Tokyo! You evoke the sense of place really well, and the characters seem real, too.
Read full commentnot sure about this : "Her hair was as black as a raven’s"
looking forward to next part, though sounds like it will be...
Posted in Enoshima (Part One of Two)
These are so much fun to read
Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2024
These are so much fun to read :0) If only museum information cards were written like this! Am intrigued by the Rose Garden Palace - were there highly scented roses like those needed to make attar of roses? Do you remember what the gardens were...
Read full commentPosted in Lovely Palace, Must Fly
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