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Dingle! That is near where we
Posted on Wed, 27 Sep 2023
Dingle! That is near where we went on holiday when I was 5 or so :0) Everywhere, even where I am now, is tame by comparison. I do not remember the rain, only the brightness of the colours outside (probably rain washed!) and I do not even have any...
you were really brave going! There are so many horror stories about the wounds going infected, so I am glad you didn't have that, too. You described the whole experience very well
As Jenny says, brilliant use of IP! your description
"so cheap to make,
may as well throw away:
a modern era –
clean and sterile,
lazy, swinging"
made me think how plastic made possible so many things - frozen...
brilliant description of intense seconds, you moved by someone being moved by the current, moving the reader with the beauty you saw and created with the current of your words. Really enjoyed
As someone who has felt alone in the past, I found this rang very true.I hope this is not how you feel just now?
I liked the idea of a companionable alone-ness in a library, where to be alone is not to be the odd one out. And libraries are...
Bushels is a brilliant amount word, like the sound of rushing dry leaves, which might have even come from a bush! This is a lovely fresh air poem, "toes in the sand" says so much
Dingle! That is near where we
Posted on Wed, 27 Sep 2023
Dingle! That is near where we went on holiday when I was 5 or so :0) Everywhere, even where I am now, is tame by comparison. I do not remember the rain, only the brightness of the colours outside (probably rain washed!) and I do not even have any...
Read full commentPosted in Beneath Cnoc Daod
you were really brave going!
Posted on Tue, 26 Sep 2023
you were really brave going! There are so many horror stories about the wounds going infected, so I am glad you didn't have that, too. You described the whole experience very well
Read full commentPosted in Misguided In The Early 90s
very glad you keep swimming
Posted on Tue, 26 Sep 2023
very glad you keep swimming against the tide! This is magnificent
Read full commentPosted in I Found the Sea
"Our adventure is
Posted on Tue, 26 Sep 2023
"Our adventure is
over. There’s a lot of things for the skip." great poem
Read full commentPosted in Nisi
As Jenny says, brilliant use
Posted on Tue, 26 Sep 2023
As Jenny says, brilliant use of IP! your description
Read full comment"so cheap to make,
may as well throw away:
a modern era –
clean and sterile,
lazy, swinging"
made me think how plastic made possible so many things - frozen...
Posted in Fantastic Plastic!
brilliant description of
Posted on Tue, 26 Sep 2023
brilliant description of intense seconds, you moved by someone being moved by the current, moving the reader with the beauty you saw and created with the current of your words. Really enjoyed
Read full commentPosted in Hush
I liked the idea of a
Posted on Sat, 23 Sep 2023
As someone who has felt alone in the past, I found this rang very true.I hope this is not how you feel just now?
Read full commentI liked the idea of a companionable alone-ness in a library, where to be alone is not to be the odd one out. And libraries are...
Posted in "Alone..."
this is so well put together!
Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023
this is so well put together! I had no idea what you were describing, but at the end, it all fitted perfectly :0)
Read full commentPosted in The Elephant In The Room.
Bushels is a brilliant amount
Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023
Bushels is a brilliant amount word, like the sound of rushing dry leaves, which might have even come from a bush! This is a lovely fresh air poem, "toes in the sand" says so much
Read full commentPosted in Summer's Last Weep
Wow! You have brilliantly
Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023
Wow! You have brilliantly evoked the atmospheric brutality of thunder and lightning!
"such deluge of fury rages in the here and now"
"sheet lightning searches darkness"
wonderful!
Read full commentPosted in Tempestuous Stirrings
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