Hydra

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Time for a change I thought. So, I've reverted to my original user name from another site and another era. I've cleared out all the old work and I'm starting again with a blank page.

30 of my comments have received 31 Great Feedback votes

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Strong images. This has a

Posted on Tue, 05 Aug 2014

Strong images. This has a snapshot quality, as if someone had taken it quickly in passing. It works well and I like it.

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Posted in Flat Wind

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The thing is Jesus (I can

Posted on Sun, 03 Aug 2014

The thing is Jesus (I can call you Jesus can't I?) This is actually rather good. But it makes for shit reading. If this was a book I'd  have binned it before line 2.  But the dialogue is definitely film material. It's quite pacey - like being...

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Posted in Johnny Incest: P.I. (Part 2 of 2)

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And this is only the second

Posted on Wed, 25 Jun 2014

And this is only the second position! Not sure what my grand-parents would say, what with all that slurping and thrusting. I liked it though.

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Posted in Tonight Second position

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Many a true word spoken in

Posted on Sun, 15 Jun 2014

Many a true word spoken in jest. I have three daughters and I've been on that ceiling many times

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Posted in My Heart Belongs to Daddy

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Cherry worthy

Posted on Tue, 27 May 2014

Lovely natural flow of language in an autobiographical / reminiscent poem. I think the last two lines make the poem. Too soon for what the reader asks. Too soon for the loss of childhood? Too soon for the loss of friendship? What would the...

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Posted in Castles in the Sand

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