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I have 17 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 429591 times and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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This is beautiful - well done

Posted on Sat, 09 Jul 2022

This is beautiful - well done!

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Posted in Twilight Zone

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I meant cord as opposed to

Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022

I meant cord as opposed to chord which I think is musical?

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Posted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part Two of Three)

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Nice build up of tension this

Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022

Nice build up of tension this part

couple of things:

bulb dangling from a chord on the ceiling

Her tartan, plaid skirt

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Posted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part Two of Three)

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That reads much better now.

Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022

That reads much better now. About the dialogue: one of the best pieces of writing advice I ever received was from Ewan, years ago - about trying very hard not to make things obvious - eg 'is that a dagger I see before me?'. I always remember that...

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Posted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part One of Three)

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This is our Poem of the Month

Posted on Mon, 06 Jun 2022

This is our Poem of the Month - Congratulations!

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Posted in Meet Ze Monsta

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I completely missed out on

Posted on Fri, 01 Jul 2022

I completely missed out on this wonderful interpretation - thanks for posting and congratulations on the cherries. Some of the old fairytales were very grim weren't they! The Disney versions are so one dimensional

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Posted in Snow White

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I'm very intrigued to know

Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022

I'm very intrigued to know more - some good scene setting in this part!

A few suggestions:

Little Bobby Weaver/a small boy - but he's a teenager? Also much further down he's referred to as little again

Are you sure Nokia is a...

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Posted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part One of Three)

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Thank you for this onemore -

Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022

Thank you for this onemore - my favourite time, and you've recreated it in words

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Posted in Goldenrod and Wild Aster

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I wish you all the best of

Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022

I wish you all the best of luck Jean and will think of you on Thursday (with crossed fingers)

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Posted in Chemo

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Beautiful - thank you so much

Posted on Sat, 02 Jul 2022

Beautiful - thank you so much Jenny!

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Posted in Harvest Mouse

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