Hawthorn Realm - Needs editing - 10 - 2019

Short fantasy Chapter story.

Hawthorn Realm 7 Part 1

Efa walked to the Professor, slipping her hand into his. "Reamon, Peter will be fine." She rested her head on his arm.

Hawthorn Realm 7 Part 2

I posted this chapter in two sections. taking a vote stop here or continue?...Wes

Hawthorn Realm Chapter 5

Hawthorn Realm Chapter Five The formatting is a bit off. I've played with it but its still not 100% I don't know...Wes

Hawthorn Realm Chapter Four

I could use feed back and or critique. I need to see if I'm on the right track, or should give it up and sell pencils to tourists...Wes

Hawthorn Realm Chapter One

Hey folks, Hawthorn could really use some critiques. I'm only 48hrs old here I've critiqued over a dozen.

Hawthorn Realm Chapter Six

Hawthorn Realm Chapter 6 Word Count 818

Hawthorn Realm Chapter Three

Hawthorn Realm Wednesday, October 03, 2012 Chapter Three Word Count 769

Hawthorn Realm Chapter Two

Hawthorn Realm Wednesday, October 17, 2012 Chapter Two Word Count 769 "Miss Synan." Professor Maudlin rapped sharply on the wooden desk.

Hawthorn Revision to Chapter One Removed-Sent to Dry Cleaners...Wes

Removing Revision had nothing to do with comments. I felt the story still needs a little TLC.It will return.