Hawthorn Realm - Needs editing - 10 - 2019
Short fantasy Chapter story.
Efa walked to the Professor, slipping her hand into his. "Reamon, Peter will be fine." She rested her head on his arm.
I posted this chapter in two sections. taking a vote stop here or continue?...Wes
Hawthorn Realm Chapter Five The formatting is a bit off. I've played with it but its still not 100% I don't know...Wes
I could use feed back and or critique. I need to see if I'm on the right track, or should give it up and sell pencils to tourists...Wes
Hey folks, Hawthorn could really use some critiques. I'm only 48hrs old here I've critiqued over a dozen.
Hawthorn Realm Wednesday, October 03, 2012 Chapter Three Word Count 769
Hawthorn Realm Wednesday, October 17, 2012 Chapter Two Word Count 769 "Miss Synan." Professor Maudlin rapped sharply on the wooden desk.