Lost Manor

By munchkinkittie

An idea i've been toying with for a while now. Just trying it now on paper. If you have any suggestions please let me know! I am trying to improve my long story writing skills, and any advice is appreciated!

This is a psuedo ghost story about these two adventurers who happen upon an 'abandoned' manor. 

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Lost Manor Ch.1 Intro

By munchkinkittie on Mon, 28 Dec 2015

The time had come. The moon gleamed brightly on the quiet manor. Vines had grown deep into the stone base, and a whisper of age was crumbled the old...
Fantasy
Story
Certificate 12

Lost Manor Ch.2 Awakening

By munchkinkittie on Mon, 28 Dec 2015

Noire. Noire. Noire. A soft footstep, barely audible. A swish of cloth casting a pale shadow in a moonbeam. A ghostly reflection in a cracked mirror...
Fantasy
Story
Certificate 12

Lost Manor Ch.3 Onlookers

By munchkinkittie on Mon, 28 Dec 2015

“Do you feel that?” “Someone is watching us.” Two shadows loomed at the outskirts of the overgrown garden. A tall, lean young man with unkempt black...
Fantasy
Story
Certificate 12

Lost Manor Ch.4 Rooftops

By munchkinkittie on Thu, 31 Dec 2015

“All right, well let’s get a move on then,” Kuro made to move forward. “Wait!” Rikku grabbed his arm. “Look at the ground.” Kuro looked down and saw...
Fantasy
Story
Certificate 12