Prologue: A boy amidst wolves
Just an aspiring young author here, hoping to get some feedback on a prologue I'd typed up for a novel I'm working on. Set in a semi-dystopian world, full of magic and demons - usual stuff. As I'm limited to a word count, I'll try and post it in batches, though the entirety of it all is lengthy. That aside, just hoping to get some critique on what I've written thus far and any suggestions on how it could be improved would be appreciated.
All the best.
© Gregory Humphreys 2015
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Part Three (Final)

Voices began anew from outside the cabin, causing Edwin to start. Creeping over to the window nearest to him, he peered out, scanning the murkiness...
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Part Two

Just as Edwin thought he could stand it no longer, Ferric suddenly stopped. Kneeling down carefully, he beckoned to the boy to follow his lead...
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