Swept Under: Drafts (looking for feedback)
By Sir Loin
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Swept Under: Chapter 1: draft (looking for feedback)
Maxis, with the rest of the class, watched from the shore. He saw the lifeguard jump in as soon as Cameron and Trevor's heads were spotted bobbing...
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Swept Under: Chapter 2: (looking for feedback)
“I was late home today, y‘know.” “Realy? Why was that?” “Some boys almost died at the beach.” The dinner table fell silent for a moment. “What...
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