Swept Under: Drafts (looking for feedback)
By Sir Loin
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Swept Under: Prologue: (looking for feedback) 25/03/26
Waves coiled and crashed against the surface of the water. The wind howled while volleyballs were being punted through the warm breeze and into the...
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Swept Under: Chapter 1: draft (looking for feedback) 25/03/26
Maxis, with the rest of the class, watched from the shore as the event unfolded. He saw the lifeguard jump in as soon as Cameron and Trevor's heads...
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Swept Under: Chapter 2: (looking for feedback) 25/03/26
“I was late home today, y‘know.” “Realy? Why was that?” “Some boys almost died at the beach.” The dinner table fell silent for a moment. “What...
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Swept Under: Chapter 3: (looking for feedback) 26/03/26
“We’ve been trying for half an hour to get hold of her mother.” “Well keep trying.” Karina’s ears woke up first, then her skin, which started to...
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Swept Under: Chapter 4: (looking for feedback) 26/03/26
‘All she had to do was take to stupid book, but ended up causing a whole scene. I shouldn’t have said yes to her dumb plan,’ thought Maxis. Trevor...
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