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Swept Under: Prologue: (looking for feedback) 20/04/26

Waves coiled and crashed against the surface of the water. The wind howled while volleyballs were being punted through the warm breeze and into the...

Swept Under: Chapter 1: draft (looking for feedback) 20/04/26

Maxis, with the rest of the class, watched from the shore as the event unfolded. He saw the lifeguard jump in as soon as Cameron and Trevor's heads...

Swept Under: Chapter 2: (looking for feedback) 20/04/26

“I was late home today, y‘know.” “Realy? Why was that?” “Some boys almost died at the beach.” The dinner table fell silent for a moment. “What...

Swept Under: Chapter 3: (looking for feedback) 20/04/26

“We’ve been trying for half an hour to get hold of her mother.” “Well keep trying.” Karina’s ears woke up first, then her skin, which started to...

Swept Under: Chapter 4: (looking for feedback) 20/04/26

‘All she had to do was take to stupid book, but ended up causing a whole scene. I shouldn’t have said yes to her dumb plan,’ thought Maxis. Trevor...

Swept Under: Chapter 5: (looking for feedback) 20/04/26

Trevor got up before dawn and went for a run around the block. He liked it, the way the cold air dried his throat and made his nose run, and the way...

Swept Under: Chapter 6: (looking for feedback) 25/04/26

After being embarrassed in front of the whole school and thrown down the stairs, Red was all Musa could see. A stream of blood ran down his shin. The...

Swept Under: Chapter 7: (looking for feedback) 27/04/26

Maxis arrived at English class late. He took an earful from the teacher and sat down between the classroom wall and an empty seat. A couple of...