opinions wanted!

hey there holly.. not sure what you mean by constructive critisicm.. but I'll check out your work later when I log on and will send you an e-mail telling you what I think.. I'am not much cop at the technical aspects of writing.. but I can give you my opinion as a reader.. if that's ok anyway I've gotta go now... but will e-mail you with my feedback.. when I next log into the site.. and have taken a look at your work.. rich