Creati\/e feedback

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Mon, 2012-04-23 12:43

Creati\/e feedback

Hey ABC'ers, I\/e just finished making a photo \/ideo to go with a song i written. Can i get some \/iews and shares please, help spread the message of creation.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=16Pbq02cxEE&hd=1

Its an original song, words by me and music by kieran Mc Carthy, Please let me grow by watching and sharing.
Xx

Mon, 2012-04-23 13:44

skinner_jennifer

Hi There Will, just listened to your musical track, I really thought it was good, it reminded me of a band from the 1970s called the Strawbs. By the way I loved your voice, very mellow. Jenny.

Mon, 2012-04-23 16:18

WillSimpson

Thanks, I listen to the strawbs, the ones with sandy denny? Tanks for listening, x

Until we feel our thoughts our thinking remains unfelt

Mon, 2012-04-23 18:51

lavadis

Interesting and thought provoking - have a look at my "love in a time of riots" on the same theme and see what you think. I thought the photo montage was very well thought through and put together.

Mon, 2012-04-23 20:28

Parson Thru

I agree with lavadis about the photo montage and like the song, too. Together they form a great piece of concept art (and I like the message). The lyric and vocal are great: kind of haunting and appealing. The vocal carries the message well. I like the refrain and just wonder if it needs a bridge of some sort just to take it to another level - just a kind of juxtaposition. That might just be my own taste bleeding into an objective view but hey, all our stuff is subjective. Like it a lot though. Well done Will and Kieran.

Parson Thru

Thu, 2012-04-26 12:07

WillSimpson

Appreciate that, thankks

Until we feel our thoughts our thinking remains unfelt

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