the problem with knickers by mickleberry

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the problem with knickers by mickleberry

http://www.abctales.com/story/mickleberry/the-problem-with-knickers

found my morning poem.

i like the title and the shape this makes on the page, and the story is a bit like a carry-on, it made me laugh particularly the end.

A great read

Juliet

http://www.freewebs.com/michaeljamestreacy/index.htm Thanks, Juliet. Sorry I'm late responding. I deliberately wrote the poem to achieve the shape. I think it works better centred on the page though - you get a 'sort-of' sexy serpentine shape. I try to be a bit different from the norm occasionally. The story itself is 'sort-of' true - those voluminous bloomers where a sight to behold. Take care now.

 

i once had a petticoat fall down as i was walking the kids to school :) that was funny........... :) actually i like the poem too :)

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!

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