in=remembrance by foster

Yeah, a very good idea. I love the manner of the delivery. The italicised parts mixed with the story work really well, I think. Content and style! 2 out of 2! Enzo.. www.thedevilbetweenus.com

I liked this one as well. Please Foster, tell me how to add italics. i can't get it to work for me.

Thanks so much for the flag, Maisie, and thanks to all for the comments. I tried to do something different with this story, but I fear it’s no more than a typical Foster tale. The italics I was unsure about - thanks for the encouragement, Enzo. QueenElf, as for how to add them, try this link for formatting tips: http://www.abctales.com/filter/tips Simply bookend whatever you want formatted with the appropriate codes. For italics, use cite (go to the link, you'll see what I mean). Thanks, Foster.

Don't put yourself down, that was really good with a twist, I misunderstood the timing until the last sentence. Yet another well written story from Foster.

this is great the ending nicely surprised me and made me feel all warm inside. the facts about memory as a reconstruction really work and add understanding to the process of piecing together an event and how we can jump to assumptions. well executed. I cant't think of anything i thought needed improving but i will read it again later and give it a bit more thought. great read Juliet