Constructive Criticism Of My Story

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Constructive Criticism Of My Story

I've written a story very recently and I've placed it on ABC and I was wondering if some people could read it and pass on their thoughts about how it could be improved. This would be a great help to me as I'm currently working on a plot for another story and anything that I could do would be a great help before I write it. Thanks! (its called 'Retribution')

De shah Voo
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slap me some one.
ProzacDolls
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Slapping yourself hurts. Just as if your brain was dripping down the back of your throat.
paul_may
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I take it then you don't like my story then
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