Constructive Criticism Of My Story
Wed, 2001-05-30 18:15
#1
Constructive Criticism Of My Story
I've written a story very recently and I've placed it on ABC and I was wondering if some people could read it and pass on their thoughts about how it could be improved. This would be a great help to me as I'm currently working on a plot for another story and anything that I could do would be a great help before I write it. Thanks! (its called 'Retribution')
slap me some one.
Slapping yourself hurts. Just as if your brain was dripping down the back of your throat.
I take it then you don't like my story then