This poem "orbital" is very much a work in progress. The original poem has a more direct sexual allegorical meaning within its content, which is pretty easy for the reader to see. What I have been attempting to do here, in both these new positions (or drafts) is take the original notion use some new techniques I have learned through poetry analyis and in doing so I am attempting hide the meaning behind a greater image: using both divergence of meaning and deveaition from accepted norms of English use. From this position In other words It clould easily be about a butterfly as it could be erotic.
