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A detailed elegy, so much
Posted on Wed, 29 Dec 2021
A detailed elegy, so much movement in a place of stillness - the rain sweeping, memories flickering, flowers decaying, all with your calm, measured rhythm, almost like someone pacing thoughtfully. But also
I liked this very much, all the different things weaving through - the arrival of potatoes to their apotheosis at Twerton Park, your Mum with her potato peeler and you taking your children to sample the culinary highlight of all your travels....
Hullo :0) I was thinking of you this afternoon while walking, that you haven't posted anything for ages and wondering how you are, and now you have! I hope you are well.
This is intense! Looking back up the page I couldn't believe how...
Very funny :0) Not just that, though, I loved the Dom bits, particularly the doorknob, that is genius! I liked the Tom Cruise thing, too, and this is a perfect summary of the PM : "As it was, he struggled to remember the previous day. He...
I love the title :0) The contrast between "time absolute" with "wander vaguely through his day" . Also "shave/a millisecond here and there," "millisecond "and the imprecision of "here and there" is brilliant. It's a lovely gentle,...
A detailed elegy, so much
Posted on Wed, 29 Dec 2021
A detailed elegy, so much movement in a place of stillness - the rain sweeping, memories flickering, flowers decaying, all with your calm, measured rhythm, almost like someone pacing thoughtfully. But also
" Yew trees (stoical), standing...
Read full commentPosted in In Memoriam
I didn't know you are an
Posted on Tue, 28 Dec 2021
I didn't know you are an artist as well as a fabulous writer!
Thankyou so much for the cherries :0) Ewan's poems are so often inspiring
Read full commentPosted in BBBB
I liked this very much, all
Posted on Tue, 28 Dec 2021
I liked this very much, all the different things weaving through - the arrival of potatoes to their apotheosis at Twerton Park, your Mum with her potato peeler and you taking your children to sample the culinary highlight of all your travels....
Read full commentPosted in The Chips at Twerton Park
Sure I remember the original
Posted on Mon, 27 Dec 2021
Sure I remember the original ? This part particularly unforgettable !
"to make nutritious goo
in tubes to suck and squeeze it through
and ooze the dollops to your mouth"
if in relation to food, (maybe other things in...
Read full commentPosted in Spaceship Food
Hullo :0) I was thinking of
Posted on Sun, 26 Dec 2021
Hullo :0) I was thinking of you this afternoon while walking, that you haven't posted anything for ages and wondering how you are, and now you have! I hope you are well.
This is intense! Looking back up the page I couldn't believe how...
Read full commentPosted in An Undertaking
This bit reminded me of best
Posted on Fri, 24 Dec 2021
This bit reminded me of best Christmases :
"laughter captured while favourite music fills
the air with sound."
I do hope you have a great time tomorrow, lots and lots of good wishes for the coming year
XXX
Read full commentPosted in That Christmas Feeling
Very funny :0) Not just that,
Posted on Fri, 24 Dec 2021
Very funny :0) Not just that, though, I loved the Dom bits, particularly the doorknob, that is genius! I liked the Tom Cruise thing, too, and this is a perfect summary of the PM : "As it was, he struggled to remember the previous day. He...
Read full commentPosted in A Christmas Boris
Agree with everyone else,
Posted on Thu, 23 Dec 2021
Agree with everyone else, brilliant storytelling - I particularly liked your bit about "only the very astute" having a clock since time began.
I used to work in Sainsbury's and one day another member of staff was complaining about a man...
Read full commentPosted in Time (Clock of The Heart)
I love the title :0) The
Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021
I love the title :0) The contrast between "time absolute" with "wander vaguely through his day" . Also "shave/a millisecond here and there," "millisecond "and the imprecision of "here and there" is brilliant. It's a lovely gentle,...
Read full commentPosted in The exact time for dozing!
I hope very much that you do!
Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021
I hope very much that you do!
Read full commentPosted in The Otherworldly Visitor of Oscaloo
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