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Agree with everyone else,
Posted on Thu, 23 Dec 2021
Agree with everyone else, brilliant storytelling - I particularly liked your bit about "only the very astute" having a clock since time began.
I used to work in Sainsbury's and one day another member of staff was complaining about a man...
I love the title :0) The contrast between "time absolute" with "wander vaguely through his day" . Also "shave/a millisecond here and there," "millisecond "and the imprecision of "here and there" is brilliant. It's a lovely gentle,...
I liked this very much :0) Is kind of how I feel about seagulls, it is lovely to read something where the hated and feared are seen as belonging, welcoming. I liked your build up with the walk, too, giving the idea that to like something as bad...
wonderful lines in your poem, particularly liked "a glance alive with chaos," you have mixed up frightening and feeling happy really well, it had a breathlessness, almost like a struggle. "just never imagining friendships wouldn't last." is so...
I love these Bulgarian stories :0) When you said we write only for our own amusement, that may be true for me, but don't put yourselfdown like that? These could so easily be a best seller? You could start off with how you found your...
thankyou for saying about the plastic starlight. I know what you mean about tinsel regarding the modern stuff - it is a bit um Trumpian, but I LOVE tinsel from about 20 years ago, much finer and sort of crunchy, not the glittering trophy tails...
That first stanza is a great beginning, and you've woven the lyrics into your poem very cleverly. Weirdly never ever get tired of that song, always sends shivers up my spine the first few notes :0)
Agree with everyone else,
Posted on Thu, 23 Dec 2021
Agree with everyone else, brilliant storytelling - I particularly liked your bit about "only the very astute" having a clock since time began.
I used to work in Sainsbury's and one day another member of staff was complaining about a man...
Read full commentPosted in Time (Clock of The Heart)
I love the title :0) The
Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021
I love the title :0) The contrast between "time absolute" with "wander vaguely through his day" . Also "shave/a millisecond here and there," "millisecond "and the imprecision of "here and there" is brilliant. It's a lovely gentle,...
Read full commentPosted in The exact time for dozing!
I hope very much that you do!
Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021
I hope very much that you do!
Read full commentPosted in The Otherworldly Visitor of Oscaloo
I liked this very much :0) Is
Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021
I liked this very much :0) Is kind of how I feel about seagulls, it is lovely to read something where the hated and feared are seen as belonging, welcoming. I liked your build up with the walk, too, giving the idea that to like something as bad...
Read full commentPosted in A Company of Wolves
This is absolutely perfect
Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021
This is absolutely perfect all through, thankyou so much for posting, I didn't want it to end
Read full commentPosted in The Otherworldly Visitor of Oscaloo
wonderful lines in your poem,
Posted on Tue, 21 Dec 2021
wonderful lines in your poem, particularly liked "a glance alive with chaos," you have mixed up frightening and feeling happy really well, it had a breathlessness, almost like a struggle. "just never imagining friendships wouldn't last." is so...
Read full commentPosted in If I Could Turn Back Time
I love these Bulgarian
Posted on Tue, 21 Dec 2021
I love these Bulgarian stories :0) When you said we write only for our own amusement, that may be true for me, but don't put yourself down like that? These could so easily be a best seller? You could start off with how you found your...
Read full commentPosted in The Merry Moth of December
thankyou for saying about the
Posted on Sun, 19 Dec 2021
thankyou for saying about the plastic starlight. I know what you mean about tinsel regarding the modern stuff - it is a bit um Trumpian, but I LOVE tinsel from about 20 years ago, much finer and sort of crunchy, not the glittering trophy tails...
Read full commentPosted in T is for Tinsel and Twigs
That first stanza is a great
Posted on Sun, 19 Dec 2021
That first stanza is a great beginning, and you've woven the lyrics into your poem very cleverly. Weirdly never ever get tired of that song, always sends shivers up my spine the first few notes :0)
Read full commentPosted in A Fairy Tale of New York
Thanyou so much Jane! I hope
Posted on Fri, 17 Dec 2021
Thanyou so much Jane! I hope you have a wonderful Christmas
Read full commentPosted in Day before a birthday
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