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this is great, the insight,
Posted on Wed, 29 Apr 2020
this is great, the insight, the rhythm :
"When anger and resentment form the core, everything on top is window-dressing: the character is not believable, the traits of affection, generosity are badly carried off. I see this daily.
The poem gave me the impression of the writer stuck at the bottom of a pond with something that has been there a long time and is sinking. The writer is stuck as if snagged on a piece of rusty metal, but he is...
Sorry to be so repetetive, but I loved the serene swan doctor too, ministering the bank with her beak :0) I had not heard the word virions before either. It has a liquidy sound from all the vowels. The borrowed saints made me think of people in...
I enjoyed this! Particularly as it is just the sort of thing I would have done with my dog. And then worried about him on the broken glass etc. A great way to go to another world.
I like "have basked in the radiance of ignorance" (having come in from sitting in the sunshine, too bright on my book to read. Just sit there and, well, BASK)
I love the idea of them drinking dawn light, too! They make me jump out of my skin in the woods, as they wait till I almost trip over them before running off :0)
This was a wonderful one. I love the bit about him saying not to swat the fly as it was his friend :0) I am very glad it is pod as I had missed it, and it cheered me up lots
this is great, the insight,
Posted on Wed, 29 Apr 2020
this is great, the insight, the rhythm :
"When anger and resentment form the core, everything on top is window-dressing: the character is not believable, the traits of affection, generosity are badly carried off. I see this daily.
...
Read full commentPosted in Heaven-sent
That is intense observation.
Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2020
That is intense observation.
The poem gave me the impression of the writer stuck at the bottom of a pond with something that has been there a long time and is sinking. The writer is stuck as if snagged on a piece of rusty metal, but he is...
Read full commentPosted in La belleza
They ARE greyhound trees!
Posted on Wed, 22 Apr 2020
They ARE greyhound trees! How brilliant of you to think of this! Graceful, light and whippy. My favourite tree :0) Have you heard the rhyme
if the oak is out before the ash, we are in for a splash
but if the ash is out before the...
Read full commentPosted in Signs of Spring 9)
Sorry to be so repetetive,
Posted on Wed, 22 Apr 2020
Sorry to be so repetetive, but I loved the serene swan doctor too, ministering the bank with her beak :0) I had not heard the word virions before either. It has a liquidy sound from all the vowels. The borrowed saints made me think of people in...
Read full commentPosted in I Want To Tell You Things
I enjoyed this! Particularly
Posted on Wed, 15 Apr 2020
I enjoyed this! Particularly as it is just the sort of thing I would have done with my dog. And then worried about him on the broken glass etc. A great way to go to another world.
Read full commentPosted in Crab Customs
I like "have basked in the
Posted on Mon, 13 Apr 2020
I like "have basked in the radiance of ignorance" (having come in from sitting in the sunshine, too bright on my book to read. Just sit there and, well, BASK)
Read full commentPosted in And Yet It Moves
I love the idea of them
Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2020
I love the idea of them drinking dawn light, too! They make me jump out of my skin in the woods, as they wait till I almost trip over them before running off :0)
Read full commentPosted in Hares
This was a wonderful one. I
Posted on Thu, 09 Apr 2020
This was a wonderful one. I love the bit about him saying not to swat the fly as it was his friend :0) I am very glad it is pod as I had missed it, and it cheered me up lots
Read full commentPosted in The Coffee Pot on the Corner - A Craven Danger Mystery
wonderful! :
Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2020
wonderful! :
"Some have risen, concrete towers of grey
from the earth with the density of heartache"
reminded me so strongly of a certain kind of sky
Posted in I Look Up
What a busy garden you have!
Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2020
What a busy garden you have! I am glad your lovely lab is still going out into the sunshine
Read full commentPosted in Looking Out My Back Window
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