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This bit, in the middle of
Posted on Mon, 13 Jan 2020
This bit, in the middle of all the trance inducing greenery like a dagger in a soft hand:
every decency,
every abomination is homogenised -
this slavery of a belief
that is the condemnation of the abused.
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Read full commentPosted in Lime Tree
You evoke a very strong
Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2020
You evoke a very strong feeling of uneasiness:
she will show you
that you are no hunter at all -
you are the little lamb that knows
the cold sharp of terror, that knows you have,
unnoticed,
drifted from...
Read full commentPosted in Wolf moon
I like the idea of willows
Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2020
I like the idea of willows talking to the moon and hiding nests off moon pearly eggs :0)
Read full commentPosted in There is hope here
I like the waterfall "c"
Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2020
I like the waterfall "c" sounds, in cleft and cliff and crystal - you didn't need to say the sound as the sight words give it, really clever! The last line, every word seems stressed so it is full of the power of a mass of water.
The woods...
Read full commentPosted in Water-Break-its-Neck, Radnor Forest
beautiful Rhiannon, I
Posted on Thu, 15 Nov 2012
beautiful Rhiannon, I particularly like how you use the form to build images then melt them away. Not just clever but creating emotional impact as well. I particularly like the last stanza with its vital surge in the middle like a wave and then...
Read full commentPosted in Poignant ice tribute to Titanic victims (Belfast, 21/10/12)
I feel for you.
Posted on Mon, 06 Jan 2020
I feel for you.
Everything tells you to HELP but if everything you are is rejected what is the right thing to do? I was lucky because my brothers did/do everything. You HAVE TO HAVE A BREAK or you will break yourself! I am so sorry to...
Read full commentPosted in Catharsis
Luigi I have lost count of
Posted on Sun, 05 Jan 2020
Luigi I have lost count of the things I have learned from reading your poems. I am glad you got a cherry, you ARE wise, and witty also! No reflection necessary
Read full commentPosted in Reflected Glory
I could not look at the
Posted on Fri, 03 Jan 2020
I could not look at the pictures. You are so brave to have and made this strong message from them. Beautiful but still holding the horror
Read full commentPosted in You can’t cling to something once it has gone.
Usually I think of myself as
Posted on Thu, 02 Jan 2020
Usually I think of myself as clumsy and bad at maths, but you make me feel that subconciously even I must be an engineer :0) I have heard that it is basic jobs that need no "thinking" but involve handmovement we take for granted, that no AI will...
Read full commentPosted in Enablers for the special 10
wow Luigi, you are so full of
Posted on Mon, 30 Dec 2019
wow Luigi, you are so full of fascinating information!
Read full commentPosted in Decameron (edited)
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