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As Penny says, your
Posted on Wed, 05 May 2021
As Penny says, your description of migration is so powerful! This is amazing:
I'm so sorry to read you are unwell Rhiannon, and I do hope that changes for the better very soon. I wouldn't have guessed from this poem though, which is vibrant and strong as you, the cottage rooted in the landscape with "always" and the...
Wonderful story! Agree with CM Please keep going. Love this :“His first day in the rainforest, he fell down a steep cliff and into some poisonous plant and was bitten by a snake hiding there, but he is on the mend and expected to fully recover,...
How I wish my Dad could have read this, he would have absolutely LOVED your sense of gentle humour :0) So much comedy these days is gritty or sharp, but this is affectionate, warm even. I hope there are lots more to come, you are onto a winner :0...
As Penny says, your
Posted on Wed, 05 May 2021
As Penny says, your description of migration is so powerful! This is amazing:
"1700 miles of the blank canvas
of an ocean; their name for it -
a bird-like word for death,
a vastness
upon which
...
Read full commentPosted in Blackpoll warbler
I'm so sorry to read you are
Posted on Mon, 03 May 2021
I'm so sorry to read you are unwell Rhiannon, and I do hope that changes for the better very soon. I wouldn't have guessed from this poem though, which is vibrant and strong as you, the cottage rooted in the landscape with "always" and the...
Read full commentPosted in Coastal Cottage (Pembrokeshire)
Ohhhhhhhhh what a cliff
Posted on Mon, 03 May 2021
Ohhhhhhhhh what a cliff hanger!!!
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 5
I couldn't resist reading
Posted on Sat, 01 May 2021
I couldn't resist reading this aloud - the first 2 lines in particular are so satisfying to say! Also the bit about polar bears made me smile :0)
Although it's sad to realise that we are as likely to visit Mars as somewhere beautiful on...
Read full commentPosted in Roaming the world, and beyond
I liked "haven of canvas" too
Posted on Tue, 27 Apr 2021
I liked "haven of canvas" too, and also the contrast of "tin can" with all the exotic names
Read full commentPosted in Footsteps on Mars
Love this Jenny, thankyou so
Posted on Tue, 27 Apr 2021
Love this Jenny, thankyou so much for posting
Read full commentPosted in Sunrise
good gracious! I would never
Posted on Mon, 26 Apr 2021
good gracious! I would never have guessed so erudite a poet was such a rascal :0)
Read full commentPosted in Guilty Pleasures
Wonderful story! Agree with
Posted on Sun, 25 Apr 2021
Wonderful story! Agree with CM Please keep going. Love this :“His first day in the rainforest, he fell down a steep cliff and into some poisonous plant and was bitten by a snake hiding there, but he is on the mend and expected to fully recover,...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 4
Politics just makes me cross?
Posted on Wed, 21 Apr 2021
Politics just makes me cross? I wish I had your easy going style! Have only JUST got the pun of your title, it's brilliant :0)
Read full commentPosted in Most Vial
How I wish my Dad could have
Posted on Wed, 21 Apr 2021
How I wish my Dad could have read this, he would have absolutely LOVED your sense of gentle humour :0) So much comedy these days is gritty or sharp, but this is affectionate, warm even. I hope there are lots more to come, you are onto a winner :0...
Read full commentPosted in Most Vial
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