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I am so sorry to hear that! I
Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2024
I am so sorry to hear that! I hope it has been recognised to be through no fault of your own
To start with, it seemed the dream country, somewhere anyone could earn a living by writing. But if all the writing is rubbish there, (because no one has to try, maybe?) why would anyone want to read? Even a good writer's mind might become...
Fabulous rhymes Luigi! Very enjoyable altogether :0) Gave me a strange impression of camels loaded up with cock-tail cabinets trekking across the desert
You make a really good point, without letting your emotions overcome you, which is more than I have been able to do, the times I have tried the last few months!
"In the middle of the box was a circular glass lens, a black pupil surrounded by a luminous red iris." made me think of Sauron, not Hal :0) Glad the narrator made it out! And that Fritz was not Sauron, that he gave all his former students choice...
I am looking forward to the crescendo! It will be sad if there are to be no more outings for Perfidia, she is a BRILLIANT character - don't suppose she could set up a detective agency of her own, with Chaos? Would love to see her outwitting some...
So interesting how you are unfolding Perfidia's character, this fragility. And Daphne softening up, too. You are building up to an explosive dinner party!!!
"It's clear that I can't communicate with these people" that's the saddest line, as maybe if he had been able to, before, whatever happened to cause him to become a ghost could have been averted.
Great build up of tension with the short...
I am so sorry to hear that! I
Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2024
I am so sorry to hear that! I hope it has been recognised to be through no fault of your own
Read full commentPosted in On the Shelf Again, so to speak! By Alfred N.Muggins
That IS an interesting twist!
Posted on Sun, 03 Nov 2024
That IS an interesting twist! Poor Martha! Just when it seemed super complicated already!
Read full commentLoved "fur" elise doorbell :0)
Posted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 22
To start with, it seemed the
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2024
To start with, it seemed the dream country, somewhere anyone could earn a living by writing. But if all the writing is rubbish there, (because no one has to try, maybe?) why would anyone want to read? Even a good writer's mind might become...
Read full commentPosted in The Politician's Daughter
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!! What a
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2024
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!! What a plot twist! Didn't see that one coming :0) Masterful storytelling!
Read full commentPosted in Strange Brew (Dead Reckoning series - Part 33)
Fabulous rhymes Luigi! Very
Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2024
Fabulous rhymes Luigi! Very enjoyable altogether :0) Gave me a strange impression of camels loaded up with cock-tail cabinets trekking across the desert
Read full commentPosted in Djinn and Tonic
You make a really good point,
Posted on Sat, 26 Oct 2024
You make a really good point, without letting your emotions overcome you, which is more than I have been able to do, the times I have tried the last few months!
Read full commentPosted in If Netanyahu and the Israelis should invade Britain? (Don’t panic! It’s only History repeating itself!) by Alfred N.Muggins
"In the middle of the box was
Posted on Wed, 30 Oct 2024
"In the middle of the box was a circular glass lens, a black pupil surrounded by a luminous red iris." made me think of Sauron, not Hal :0) Glad the narrator made it out! And that Fritz was not Sauron, that he gave all his former students choice...
Read full commentPosted in Who Wants to Live Forever?
I am looking forward to the
Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2024
I am looking forward to the crescendo! It will be sad if there are to be no more outings for Perfidia, she is a BRILLIANT character - don't suppose she could set up a detective agency of her own, with Chaos? Would love to see her outwitting some...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 21
So interesting how you are
Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2024
So interesting how you are unfolding Perfidia's character, this fragility. And Daphne softening up, too. You are building up to an explosive dinner party!!!
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 21
"It's clear that I can't
Posted on Mon, 28 Oct 2024
"It's clear that I can't communicate with these people" that's the saddest line, as maybe if he had been able to, before, whatever happened to cause him to become a ghost could have been averted.
Read full commentGreat build up of tension with the short...
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