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I hadn't thought us honouring
Posted on Tue, 27 Dec 2022
I hadn't thought of us honouring darkness with sparkly decoratations, rather defying it. But you made me think about this time of year, the "dead of Winter" being like a person and the baubles being grave goods, like the gold in barrows. Draugr...
I thought you handled all three characters well. Particularly how Tim wished his daddy didn't hit his mummy, at the same time as worrying about him, and Diane having to bear this, as well. And Mick not even having the black eye in his train of...
Ethan weaves all through this, though not the narrator he is the most important character in a way, isn't he? The one who must be protected, and the voice you give him is perfect. I love "Who are all those voices?" and the car being "good because...
I liked this very much, all the information in a torrent! You express how precious,special it is, in the universe, really well. Only, please say what does bipolar solvent mean?
I hadn't thought us honouring
Posted on Tue, 27 Dec 2022
I hadn't thought of us honouring darkness with sparkly decoratations, rather defying it. But you made me think about this time of year, the "dead of Winter" being like a person and the baubles being grave goods, like the gold in barrows. Draugr...
Read full commentPosted in December Ravens
fractal poem :0) I enjoyed
Posted on Tue, 27 Dec 2022
fractal poem :0) I enjoyed this very much, thankyou for posting
Read full commentPosted in The Magic of Dust
beautiful and reassuring,
Posted on Wed, 21 Dec 2022
beautiful and reassuring, thankyou. I am so sorry. It's a wonderful photo, too, bright and strong and in love
Read full commentPosted in Hereafter
I thought you handled all
Posted on Tue, 20 Dec 2022
I thought you handled all three characters well. Particularly how Tim wished his daddy didn't hit his mummy, at the same time as worrying about him, and Diane having to bear this, as well. And Mick not even having the black eye in his train of...
Read full commentPosted in The Last Christmas (Part Two of Two)
Thanks! Will look up a recipe
Posted on Sun, 18 Dec 2022
Thanks! Will look up a recipe for water pastry :0) Also, Kudos to your Mum! I could not possibly ever imagine making so many!!!
Read full commentPosted in Mince pies
I liked this. We are like
Posted on Sun, 18 Dec 2022
I liked this. We are like raindrops in a puddle, our ripples go out and out and over the years disappear, but our lives made the water deeper
Read full commentPosted in Remembered loves and unknown others
I loved this bit :0)
Posted on Sun, 18 Dec 2022
I loved this bit :0)
"We have to be careful bringing them into my granny’s house because if she sees them go outside the door at all she has a conniption.
‘Where are you taking them?’ she shouts from the electric reclining chair,...
Read full commentPosted in Mince pies
wow! tearing up :0)
Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2022
wow! tearing up :0)
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother Epilogue
Ethan weaves all through this
Posted on Thu, 15 Dec 2022
Ethan weaves all through this, though not the narrator he is the most important character in a way, isn't he? The one who must be protected, and the voice you give him is perfect. I love "Who are all those voices?" and the car being "good because...
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 28
I liked this very much, all
Posted on Fri, 16 Dec 2022
I liked this very much, all the information in a torrent! You express how precious,special it is, in the universe, really well. Only, please say what does bipolar solvent mean?
Read full commentPosted in The Amazing Molecule!
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