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"‘This isn’t the argument
Posted on Fri, 04 Oct 2024
"‘This isn’t the argument though, it’s just me being a husband while my wife drives the car. The argument is planned for later. Do you know where you’re going?’" This is so funny! And I loved his reaction to sheep, too. And the bed. Made me think...
DS Stone seems to be getting more and more independent of his boss, eg his upset at not remembering Archibald's name, you give him space to grow in this calmer episode
looking forward to part 2. This is a wonderful set of characters! I loved (well, that's perhaps not the right word) the detail about the Barbie doll's hair :0)
Ah. Wanting arguments sounds like Vanessa feels there's too much smoothness, she wants texture and that means splinters, blisters, callouses in emotion? I am really looking forward to this conjured up argument :0) I do like how you cover the...
Brilliant! Thankyou for such a fabulous IP response, Rhiannon! I loved the rhythm and rhyme, too, but also liked very much the hearing and sight and feeling at the start, then the last bit thinking and wondering. I looked up the poem you...
"‘This isn’t the argument
Posted on Fri, 04 Oct 2024
"‘This isn’t the argument though, it’s just me being a husband while my wife drives the car. The argument is planned for later. Do you know where you’re going?’" This is so funny! And I loved his reaction to sheep, too. And the bed. Made me think...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you....Part 36
DS Stone seems to be getting
Posted on Fri, 27 Sep 2024
DS Stone seems to be getting more and more independent of his boss, eg his upset at not remembering Archibald's name, you give him space to grow in this calmer episode
Read full commentPosted in Tears on My Pillow (Dead Reckoning series - Part 28)
Dive into this welcome of warm
Posted on Mon, 30 Sep 2024
Dive into this welcome of warm family life created by the very talented Monodemo for Pick of the Day! Please do share if you can
Read full commentPosted in Yard Sale Chapter 1
I didn't know about this,
Posted on Mon, 30 Sep 2024
I didn't know about this, either, Thankyou. You set out the story very well, the idea of scavenging scraps of light in the darkness is beautiful
Read full commentPosted in KHEPRI
that's a FABULOUS first line!
Posted on Mon, 30 Sep 2024
that's a FABULOUS first line! I LOVED this poem :0) "imprints of history get washed away". Wonderful
Read full commentPosted in Visions Carried On The Wind
looking forward to part 2
Posted on Mon, 30 Sep 2024
looking forward to part 2. This is a wonderful set of characters! I loved (well, that's perhaps not the right word) the detail about the Barbie doll's hair :0)
Read full commentPosted in Yard Sale Chapter 1
It's not just that you have
Posted on Fri, 27 Sep 2024
It's not just that you have that fantastic memory, it's how you put everything together, carry the reader along with you! Real gift
Read full commentPosted in Dogsbody (1)
Ah. Wanting arguments sounds
Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024
Ah. Wanting arguments sounds like Vanessa feels there's too much smoothness, she wants texture and that means splinters, blisters, callouses in emotion? I am really looking forward to this conjured up argument :0) I do like how you cover the...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you...Part 35
I am SO GLAD you have kept
Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024
I am SO GLAD you have kept going with these :0)
Read full commentPosted in Unleashed
Brilliant! Thankyou for such
Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024
Brilliant! Thankyou for such a fabulous IP response, Rhiannon! I loved the rhythm and rhyme, too, but also liked very much the hearing and sight and feeling at the start, then the last bit thinking and wondering. I looked up the poem you...
Read full commentPosted in Visible signs of the invisible
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