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I have 177 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 407853 times and 278 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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love "gulp the here and now"

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022

love "gulp the here and now" and "loud voices, small talk" and "pool of your imagination", how you make your sounds longer in the second part of the poem, showing it is about taking/giving time to appreciate

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Posted in Life is for the Go Getters

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I liked how you put so much

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022

I liked how you put so much in this - photos and paintings, queen and miners, ghosts and children, dust and "waterfalling" voices

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Posted in Primary Children at the Heritage Centre

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this was a rollercoaster

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022

this was a rollercoaster episode! Well Done giving Zach even more depth too, I hope it is as much fun to write as it is to read!

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Posted in Runaway Mother chapter 13

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that is an interesting

Posted on Tue, 15 Nov 2022

that is an interesting response to the IP. If looking back at oneself full of hope, in a difficult present makes now harder to bear, or inspires courage to try for change which will need chance and strength to succeed? 

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Posted in Two Photographs, 30 years apart…

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I enjoyed reading this, as

Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022

I enjoyed reading this, as all your diary entries, so much more powerful than any film footage I have seen of that time. You must be who Hawkwind wrote for, Jenny

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Posted in Edge Of Time That Influenced Mine - Nik Turner Tribute

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can't thank you enough, it is

Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022

can't thank you enough, it is grey and bleak and horrid today and now I am smiling, so many bits are laugh out loud

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Posted in The Pregnant Waitress (part 1 of 2)

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brilliant :0)

Posted on Sun, 13 Nov 2022

brilliant :0)

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Posted in Runaway Mother chapter 11

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loved "Arachne's dream

Posted on Sun, 13 Nov 2022

loved "Arachne's dream catcher" and the contrast with "school yard railings"

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Posted in Witch's Mist

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I had not heard of deer with

Posted on Wed, 09 Nov 2022

I had not heard of deer with tusks instead of antlers

I liked "blackberry and gold" very much, too, the richness, and also the sounds of "laced winds whistle"  which is so cold

and I loved your thought about what wild animals think...

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Posted in Chinese Water Deer

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wow, I will feel so proud :0)

Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2022

wow, I will feel so proud :0) And I am looking forward to reading. I hope you can make buying Ethan's clothes off the internet as exciting to read as everything so far. I loved getting bargains on Ebay, and so chuffed when people asked where I...

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Posted in Runaway Mother chapter 9

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