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love "gulp the here and now"
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022
love "gulp the here and now" and "loud voices, small talk" and "pool of your imagination", how you make your sounds longer in the second part of the poem, showing it is about taking/giving time to appreciate
that is an interesting response to the IP. If looking back at oneself full of hope, in a difficult present makes now harder to bear, or inspires courage to try for change which will need chance and strength to succeed?
I enjoyed reading this, as all your diary entries, so much more powerful than any film footage I have seen of that time. You must be who Hawkwind wrote for, Jenny
wow, I will feel so proud :0) And I am looking forward to reading. I hope you can make buying Ethan's clothes off the internet as exciting to read as everything so far. I loved getting bargains on Ebay, and so chuffed when people asked where I...
love "gulp the here and now"
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022
love "gulp the here and now" and "loud voices, small talk" and "pool of your imagination", how you make your sounds longer in the second part of the poem, showing it is about taking/giving time to appreciate
Read full commentPosted in Life is for the Go Getters
I liked how you put so much
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022
I liked how you put so much in this - photos and paintings, queen and miners, ghosts and children, dust and "waterfalling" voices
Read full commentPosted in Primary Children at the Heritage Centre
this was a rollercoaster
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022
this was a rollercoaster episode! Well Done giving Zach even more depth too, I hope it is as much fun to write as it is to read!
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 13
that is an interesting
Posted on Tue, 15 Nov 2022
that is an interesting response to the IP. If looking back at oneself full of hope, in a difficult present makes now harder to bear, or inspires courage to try for change which will need chance and strength to succeed?
Read full commentPosted in Two Photographs, 30 years apart…
I enjoyed reading this, as
Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022
I enjoyed reading this, as all your diary entries, so much more powerful than any film footage I have seen of that time. You must be who Hawkwind wrote for, Jenny
Read full commentPosted in Edge Of Time That Influenced Mine - Nik Turner Tribute
can't thank you enough, it is
Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022
can't thank you enough, it is grey and bleak and horrid today and now I am smiling, so many bits are laugh out loud
Read full commentPosted in The Pregnant Waitress (part 1 of 2)
brilliant :0)
Posted on Sun, 13 Nov 2022
brilliant :0)
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 11
loved "Arachne's dream
Posted on Sun, 13 Nov 2022
loved "Arachne's dream catcher" and the contrast with "school yard railings"
Read full commentPosted in Witch's Mist
I had not heard of deer with
Posted on Wed, 09 Nov 2022
I had not heard of deer with tusks instead of antlers
I liked "blackberry and gold" very much, too, the richness, and also the sounds of "laced winds whistle" which is so cold
and I loved your thought about what wild animals think...
Read full commentPosted in Chinese Water Deer
wow, I will feel so proud :0)
Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2022
wow, I will feel so proud :0) And I am looking forward to reading. I hope you can make buying Ethan's clothes off the internet as exciting to read as everything so far. I loved getting bargains on Ebay, and so chuffed when people asked where I...
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 9
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