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no worries, is only since
Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2022
no worries, is only since that's how I bought stuff for my son, you can get bundles sometimes too, so only one lot of postage
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 9
I really wish I had Mary's
Posted on Wed, 09 Nov 2022
I really wish I had Mary's resilience and adaptability! The way you have her going back to 6's when Ethan is studying with her eyeliner is brilliant! And she is so resourceful! Which is maybe why the food thing bothers me so much? Would she not...
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 8
I do, too :0) I do worry
Posted on Sun, 06 Nov 2022
I do, too :0) I do worry about their diet, though - no fruit or veg or protein apart from milk
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 7
well deserved POD!
Posted on Thu, 10 Nov 2022
well deserved POD!
ebay, for second hand shoes and clothes?
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 9
there is something so
Posted on Wed, 09 Nov 2022
there is something so piercing about a robin's song, it would be enough to make anyone think they had been redeemed to hear it :0) I liked how your story could relate to anyone, none of us are without mistakes
love the word nonchalantly in...
Read full commentPosted in The Last Door
you've used Blake's rhythm
Posted on Wed, 09 Nov 2022
you've used Blake's rhythm wonderfully! and I loved the reference to stew, which always seems such comforting food as if it holds all the time of heating in it. Made me want to make one :0) Hope youb read this to your grandchildren
Read full commentPosted in Guard!!
loved "children beaming sheer
Posted on Mon, 07 Nov 2022
loved "children beaming sheer delight" that's perfect, somehow conveying their stiffness as they hold a sparkler for the first time, but also the joy in their faces, the intensity of this moment. Wonderful
ps didn't know about carrot...
Read full commentPosted in November 5
5 reads in, I think I know a
Posted on Mon, 07 Nov 2022
5 reads in, I think I know a little what this might be about. Your poems are really good value, you know, can chew them over for days, months, years.
Read full commentPosted in They've Closed the Road
yes, I liked the medals on
Posted on Sun, 06 Nov 2022
yes, I liked the medals on dressing gown very much, too
Read full commentPosted in On Ainley Top Looking Down
Brilliant, really enjoyed and
Posted on Sat, 05 Nov 2022
Brilliant, really enjoyed and it made me think, too. I hadn't realised about eclairs being made in factories. The juxtaposition is so clever
Read full commentPosted in The Night Angels of the Cake Factory Cream Room
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