I have 177 stories published in
2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 410761 times
and 278 of my stories have been cherry picked. 1538 of my 5,158 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1579 votes
1538 of my comments have received 1579 Great Feedback votes
1 Vote
yes, this captures how
Posted on Mon, 19 Sep 2022
yes, this captures how quickly it all happened. I think she must have missed her husband so much, the one person always who could make her laugh
Oh! That is exciting! My great Uncle had a house like this in Wales, with a great big Monkey Puzzle Tree outside. Not sure there were 10 bedrooms, but it seemed vast to me when I was 5 :0)
I liked your descriptions of the grandparents, you...
Again you have found the essence of the flower you choose to describe, even in the first line, with "trims" which immediately brought to mind their neatness, smallness, but with "beauty" added, also the rich wonderful surprise of finding them, a...
I don't know why, but your skillfull rhythm and rhyme in this one made me think of a current going through a circuit board, setting off some lights to shine, leaving others dull
That is a horrific account. Well Done surviving through all those walls and deprivations, including of privacy and dignity, and coming out the other side with your writing skill intact, no, bursting out of you. I had not realised from previously...
Had to look up lightning bugs, do you have fireflies???!!! I have never seen them. We live in a little town by the sea too, but I think it is very different from your lovely home
These pieces of yours are WONDERFUL to read Jean. I agree with Rhiannon about the lady in Church, thinking perhaps you wouldn't want to discuss it when you were doing an important job playing the organ. I didn't know you did that, you are really...
yes, this captures how
Posted on Mon, 19 Sep 2022
yes, this captures how quickly it all happened. I think she must have missed her husband so much, the one person always who could make her laugh
Read full commentPosted in Our Late Queen By Wendy Kirtley (my wife)
Oh! That is exciting! My
Posted on Sun, 18 Sep 2022
Oh! That is exciting! My great Uncle had a house like this in Wales, with a great big Monkey Puzzle Tree outside. Not sure there were 10 bedrooms, but it seemed vast to me when I was 5 :0)
I liked your descriptions of the grandparents, you...
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part One of Six)
Again you have found the
Posted on Sat, 17 Sep 2022
Again you have found the essence of the flower you choose to describe, even in the first line, with "trims" which immediately brought to mind their neatness, smallness, but with "beauty" added, also the rich wonderful surprise of finding them, a...
Read full commentPosted in Harebells
Oh Wow! When I was trying to
Posted on Sat, 17 Sep 2022
Oh Wow! When I was trying to think up an I P I never hoped anyone might write something so brilliant as this! WOW Rhiannon!!!
Read full commentPosted in All Seasons' Refuges
I don't know why, but your
Posted on Wed, 14 Sep 2022
I don't know why, but your skillfull rhythm and rhyme in this one made me think of a current going through a circuit board, setting off some lights to shine, leaving others dull
Read full commentPosted in To Remember, or not …
great to see bee on front
Posted on Tue, 13 Sep 2022
great to see bee on front page :0) Had to look up auric, I love the idea of a tapestry of living auras, unseen
Read full commentPosted in A Lamentation of Bees
That is a horrific account.
Posted on Mon, 12 Sep 2022
That is a horrific account. Well Done surviving through all those walls and deprivations, including of privacy and dignity, and coming out the other side with your writing skill intact, no, bursting out of you. I had not realised from previously...
Read full commentPosted in I have come a long way!
Had to look up lightning bugs
Posted on Sat, 10 Sep 2022
Had to look up lightning bugs, do you have fireflies???!!! I have never seen them. We live in a little town by the sea too, but I think it is very different from your lovely home
Read full commentPosted in "Autumn frame of Mind"
This is lovely Jenny, so
Posted on Sat, 10 Sep 2022
This is lovely Jenny, so fresh and invigourating to read, you express your rain brought energy the way the rain makes the air tingle and feel alive
Read full commentPosted in Like September Rain
These pieces of yours are
Posted on Tue, 06 Sep 2022
These pieces of yours are WONDERFUL to read Jean. I agree with Rhiannon about the lady in Church, thinking perhaps you wouldn't want to discuss it when you were doing an important job playing the organ. I didn't know you did that, you are really...
Read full commentPosted in Chemo 8
Pages