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"and flower buds – to burst,
Posted on Fri, 28 Jul 2023
"and flower buds – to burst,
Read full commentshedding pollen
which fertilizes so that seeds and fruit
can be dispersed"
great rhythm and rhyme, and your science background adding another ingredient :0) I like how you go through the...
Posted in chlorophyll
Jenny's lyrical poem about a
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
Jenny's lyrical poem about a writer's inspiration is Pick of the Day! Please do share and retweet if you can
Read full commentPosted in When All I Need Is Artistry
Jenny's lyrical poem about a
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
Jenny's lyrical poem about a writer's inspiration is Pick of the Day! Please do share and retweet if you can
Read full commentPosted in When All I Need Is Artistry
Wonderful, inspirational poem
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
Wonderful, inspirational poem! Like many others, I loved "shower of words/like cloudburst descends"
Read full commentPosted in When All I Need Is Artistry
Of course! Guessing sunny
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
Of course! Guessing sunny side up?
Read full commentPosted in Rakia Maria – Part Two of Two
I liked your description of
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
I liked your description of gallantry, drinking Maria's Rakia so Priyatelkata didn't have to :0) And the description of the lift very much too. I had only heard about teflon being a result of space travel technology so justifying the huge amount...
Read full commentPosted in Rakia Maria – Part Two of Two
I liked how Sandra is
Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2023
I liked how Sandra is concerned that Blueberry has water, even though she hates and fears the dog, showing she is not an uncaring person. And loved how Thomas's first reaction was concern for Blueberry, not his Mum :0) Which reinforced you saying...
Read full commentPosted in Blueberry - Part Three
I love the richness of your
Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2023
I love the richness of your descriptions, there seems such abundance - characters, animals, plants! Maria must be very strong willed and tough to be able to look after so many animals on her own
Read full commentPosted in Rakia Maria - Part One of Two
Wondering if, sensing how
Posted on Mon, 24 Jul 2023
Wondering if, sensing how hostile Thomas's mother is about the relationship of the two people the dog loves best, has made Blueberry hostile to her? I really liked how you describe her as "lightly Christian" and Christianity meant to be about...
Read full commentPosted in Blueberry - Part Two
It made me think of the crows
Posted on Mon, 24 Jul 2023
It made me think of the crows being like a catalyst with the storm to make your fairytale memories from childhood so strong they seemed reality, that if you were outside that window you would be in magic
Read full commentPosted in A Murder of Crows
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