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I loved your description of
Posted on Wed, 24 Jul 2024
I loved your description of the sea. Your paintings must be gorgeous
That was a rollercoaster! One minute snuggly sleeping bags and the next a prison of pointy spears! She is on the way to being quite frightening, and create a sense of jeopardy with the shift in who is in command of the situation
That bit with the band members was so uncomfortable to read, like rubbing against the grain on splintery wood. I hope Spencer doesn't change, become like them, as they are the first "men" he has interacted with. Does he get to choose who he...
Your employer should really take care of YOU more, that sounds horrible and stressful. As you say, one would think, with the terrible lack of experienced essential workers like you, that they would bend over backwards to keep you. I bet those...
That was great, how you start with the red ring wellies give bare legs! Argh! I had forgotten those, but they were such a big consideration in Summer, weren't they? The Little Mermaid not being able to walk on her new feet would have understood....
Loved this. Eric's PTSD, how he "never rang the bell to stop the bus outside Iceland". Your poem, how the theme interweaves past and present, country and shop, then comes together at the end with fishfingers coming from both kinds of Iceland,...
Oh Luigi, I hope this doesn't happen often! I cook for just me quite a bit as I am the only vegan in our house. If you have an onion, a carrot, tinned tomatoes and baked beans, you might rinse out the sugary sauce the beans come in, and cut up...
Hullo Paul :0) Have huge worries too, not just about genuine green land being built on, but also that the necessary affordable homes are no more likely to be built now than before, because they do not provide the same level of profit?
It is...
I loved your description of
Posted on Wed, 24 Jul 2024
I loved your description of the sea. Your paintings must be gorgeous
Read full commentPosted in Here I Am. By MarciaMarcia
Enjoyed very much, too. All
Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024
Enjoyed very much, too. All your descriptions zing
Read full commentPosted in Tom's Secret
That was a rollercoaster! One
Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024
That was a rollercoaster! One minute snuggly sleeping bags and the next a prison of pointy spears! She is on the way to being quite frightening, and create a sense of jeopardy with the shift in who is in command of the situation
Read full commentPosted in 'Unwanted Magic" 7
That bit with the band
Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024
That bit with the band members was so uncomfortable to read, like rubbing against the grain on splintery wood. I hope Spencer doesn't change, become like them, as they are the first "men" he has interacted with. Does he get to choose who he...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you...Part 30
Your employer should really
Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024
Your employer should really take care of YOU more, that sounds horrible and stressful. As you say, one would think, with the terrible lack of experienced essential workers like you, that they would bend over backwards to keep you. I bet those...
Read full commentPosted in ‘D Day’ : Leap Into The Unknown! (Community Care!? Actually) by Alfred N. Muggins (current affairs observer, and undercover reporter!)
That was great, how you start
Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024
That was great, how you start with the red ring wellies give bare legs! Argh! I had forgotten those, but they were such a big consideration in Summer, weren't they? The Little Mermaid not being able to walk on her new feet would have understood....
Read full commentPosted in Tang Hall Beck
Loved this. Eric's PTSD, how
Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024
Loved this. Eric's PTSD, how he "never rang the bell to stop the bus outside Iceland". Your poem, how the theme interweaves past and present, country and shop, then comes together at the end with fishfingers coming from both kinds of Iceland,...
Read full commentPosted in Eric’s War
It has been a long time since
Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024
It has been a long time since I went anywhere like this, but your fabulous description took me back instantly :
Dogs under tables,
crumbs drizzling,
sought by tongues.
I hear the clatter of
crockery; voices...
Read full commentPosted in Rain at the Forest Cafe
Oh Luigi, I hope this doesn't
Posted on Thu, 18 Jul 2024
Oh Luigi, I hope this doesn't happen often! I cook for just me quite a bit as I am the only vegan in our house. If you have an onion, a carrot, tinned tomatoes and baked beans, you might rinse out the sugary sauce the beans come in, and cut up...
Read full commentPosted in Cooking for One
Hullo Paul :0)
Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024
Hullo Paul :0) Have huge worries too, not just about genuine green land being built on, but also that the necessary affordable homes are no more likely to be built now than before, because they do not provide the same level of profit?
Read full commentIt is...
Posted in "For, being green, there is great hope" (quote from Shakespeare's HENRY VI PART 2, ACT 3 SCENE 1)
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