Geoff Smith
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Geoff Smith
I have a thin skin. I sometimes get aggy. I always realise it in a few days and feel bad about it. If I get aggy with you, I will be sorry. Seriously I appreciate the reads. A thousand thanks.
Yeah, but if you lot leave,
Posted on Sat, 09 Aug 2014
Yeah, but if you lot leave, we're stuck with them for good! But your're right that Scotland probably will be better off freed from Freidman and Hayek, Thatcher and Cameron. You guys would be able to make a more egalitarian society whilst us lot...
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I like this very much. Direct
Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2014
I like this very much. Direct and moving. I liked the ending particulary. There are loads of things I love.
And in the exquisite mirror of you,
for example - I love the idea of our partners somehow being mirrors that perhaps we...
Read full commentPosted in Reflection in you
would this work?
Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2014
I really like the poem, but I agree there is something missing too. How do you feel about the idea of putting 'The audience naps.' at the very end, making a two sentence final line?
I think this would create an amusing balance with 'we...
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