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Wonderful prose - I
Posted on Mon, 21 Jan 2019
Wonderful prose - I especially love the dialogue at the end between pizza face and angel - not just what it says, but for what it doesn't say. A few typos below. Keep going! :
perhaps you could let the police know where it is in case the owner calls them, and also maybe put something on your local facebook page? Not a photo - say they'd have to describe it to you, or the hotel in order to get it back. I see lots of...
I enjoyed this - a very strong beginning, but it seemed a little bit rushed in the second half (though you did have a lot to get through!). thank you for posting
Wonderful prose - I
Posted on Mon, 21 Jan 2019
Wonderful prose - I especially love the dialogue at the end between pizza face and angel - not just what it says, but for what it doesn't say. A few typos below. Keep going! :
her body has a repertoire of 5000 words - had
Your Song ...
Read full commentPosted in Angel 3 (disco)
A really interesting piece
Posted on Thu, 17 Jan 2019
A really interesting piece with an original approach - thank you for posting it
Read full commentPosted in Night Terrors
A well written and very
Posted on Thu, 17 Jan 2019
A well written and very personal reflection on this tragedy - well done TK
Read full commentPosted in Madeleine McCann.
perhaps you could let th
Posted on Wed, 16 Jan 2019
perhaps you could let the police know where it is in case the owner calls them, and also maybe put something on your local facebook page? Not a photo - say they'd have to describe it to you, or the hotel in order to get it back. I see lots of...
Read full commentPosted in The Training Day.
I think you did exactly the
Posted on Wed, 16 Jan 2019
I think you did exactly the right thing TK
Read full commentPosted in The Training Day.
well written, such a sad
Posted on Sat, 12 Jan 2019
well written, such a sad account of disordered eating though. I'm glad it's been categorised as fiction - I wouldn't wish this life on anyone
Read full commentPosted in For Five Minutes a Day, Only
I enjoyed this - a very
Posted on Thu, 10 Jan 2019
I enjoyed this - a very strong beginning, but it seemed a little bit rushed in the second half (though you did have a lot to get through!). thank you for posting
Read full commentPosted in The sunseeker
I really like this reflective
Posted on Sun, 06 Jan 2019
I really like this reflective piece TK and the original way in which you've approached your subject. Good luck for Wednesday!
Read full commentPosted in He Got His Name Into The Book!
This is our Facebook and
Posted on Wed, 02 Jan 2019
This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day!
Please share/retweet if you enjoyed it as much as I did (and do read part two!)
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Read full commentPosted in After The Funeral (Part 1)
Flat out brilliant. I hope
Posted on Wed, 02 Jan 2019
Flat out brilliant. I hope there's more to come?
Read full commentPosted in After The Funeral (Part 2)
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