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some very clever bits of
Posted on Fri, 09 Jun 2017
some very clever bits of satire in this!
Read full commentPosted in Bugger chapter 1
Every single word of this is
Posted on Wed, 07 Jun 2017
Every single word of this is pitch perfect. Are you writing as you post, or is this something finished? It's very very good
Read full commentPosted in Hello Walls (Chapter Three)
I agree - some lovely rich
Posted on Mon, 29 May 2017
I agree - some lovely rich imagery in this
Read full commentPosted in Summer's Entrance.
You built the atmosphere
Posted on Tue, 23 May 2017
You built the atmosphere really well - all the 'normal stuff' - the slight middle age crisis, the family weekend, the conversation between the girl and the father about the phone's torch. The sudden panic when the girl disappears is convincingly...
Read full commentPosted in The Dark - part 2
Mary-Ann is this meant for
Posted on Sun, 14 May 2017
Mary-Ann is this meant for Poetry Monthly? I'll pop into the correct category if you let me know (or you could do it yourself) : )
Read full commentPosted in Into The Blue
Hooray! Lovely to see Larry
Posted on Fri, 12 May 2017
Hooray! Lovely to see Larry and Mick back!
Read full commentPosted in Larry and Mick and the Niftily Deflected Insult
Takes a while to get going,
Posted on Tue, 09 May 2017
Takes a while to get going, but once there, the pace is good, and the resolution very well done. If you gave this one a big edit, I think it could be a winner!
Read full commentPosted in Caiman's bazaar
Best IP response I've seen so
Posted on Sun, 07 May 2017
Best IP response I've seen so far this week Luigi - well done
Read full commentPosted in If You Wait Long Enough By the River...
That last line is
Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017
That last line is heartbreaking. Thank you for postng this Elsie and please pass that cherry onto your dad
Read full commentPosted in Shlamek
I'm enjoying this Parson. It
Posted on Sat, 29 Apr 2017
I'm enjoying this Parson. It got off to quite a slow start (perhaps a bit of an edit needed there) and in this part I'm suggesting you give your reader a bit more about the characters. Just saying the man looked like a guide at the Jorvik Viking...
Read full commentPosted in Boatman's dream 2
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