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I have 17 stories published in
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My stories have been read 524055 times
and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2384 of my 15,230 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2435 votes
Hooray! Lovely to see Larry
Posted on Fri, 12 May 2017
Hooray! Lovely to see Larry and Mick back!
Read full commentPosted in Larry and Mick and the Niftily Deflected Insult
Takes a while to get going,
Posted on Tue, 09 May 2017
Takes a while to get going, but once there, the pace is good, and the resolution very well done. If you gave this one a big edit, I think it could be a winner!
Read full commentPosted in Caiman's bazaar
Best IP response I've seen so
Posted on Sun, 07 May 2017
Best IP response I've seen so far this week Luigi - well done
Read full commentPosted in If You Wait Long Enough By the River...
That last line is
Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017
That last line is heartbreaking. Thank you for postng this Elsie and please pass that cherry onto your dad
Read full commentPosted in Shlamek
I'm enjoying this Parson. It
Posted on Sat, 29 Apr 2017
I'm enjoying this Parson. It got off to quite a slow start (perhaps a bit of an edit needed there) and in this part I'm suggesting you give your reader a bit more about the characters. Just saying the man looked like a guide at the Jorvik Viking...
Read full commentPosted in Boatman's dream 2
You capture the beauty of all
Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2017
You capture the beauty of all the colour Rhiannon - well done
Read full commentPosted in Early April Flowers
- it's that sudden beauty in
Posted on Thu, 23 Mar 2017
- it's that sudden beauty in everything after a winter's bleakness isn't it - very well said Rhiannon!
Read full commentPosted in Awakening!
The short sharp works really
Posted on Sun, 19 Mar 2017
The short sharp works really well, and I imagine it sounds very effective too.
When you miss someone and it's all you can write, is something I think many of us can identify with.
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Read full commentPosted in Mum's the word
Always nice to read something
Posted on Fri, 03 Mar 2017
Always nice to read something with a happy ending! I like the detail in this story, and the narrative flows really well. If you're looking for feedback, there are some auto correct typos, and some places where I think you might have repeated the...
Read full commentPosted in The Fairy Ring
A very thoughtful piece. I
Posted on Sun, 12 Feb 2017
A very thoughtful piece. I hope you get a lot of reads for this!
Read full commentPosted in You want to leave a legacy?
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