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I think you must have got cut
Posted on Tue, 06 Mar 2018
I think you must have got cut off by our word limit TKMaxx. If there's more, perhaps you could split this into two equal shorter parts. I hope you do because people prefer to read shorter pieces on a screen and this is really worth reading. It's...
Read full commentPosted in Daniel 2016.
I've read all three parts of
Posted on Fri, 02 Mar 2018
I've read all three parts of this and the intricate detail and local colour really shine through. The dialogue is lively and the characters are beginning to emerge as believable people.
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- It really...
Read full commentPosted in Fifteen Chapter 1 (part3)
I hope your snow will
Posted on Fri, 02 Mar 2018
I hope your snow will disappear soon Camilla. I am also stuck here and it's driving me bananas, but I'm painting the insides of cupboards, and windows which is quite soothing and stops me from thinking about the fact that the heating oil is...
Read full commentPosted in Housebound
Some tight,sharp observation
Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2018
Some tight,sharp observation in this pen portrait. A very believable study of (unjustifiable) smug
Read full commentPosted in It's all about bread
Firstly I really liked the
Posted on Wed, 14 Feb 2018
Firstly I really liked the way in which you ended this - because I was expecting them all to crash, and you don't really think about the 'almost' do you - so the detailed description of just before the crash was brilliant, as was the way in which...
Read full commentPosted in Man, Son, SatNav, Bus - Part 2
You had me right there on the
Posted on Tue, 13 Feb 2018
You had me right there on the porch with you. I like the quiet contemplative style of this poem - well done, and welcome back!
Read full commentPosted in A Message In A Bottle
beautiful observation in this
Posted on Sat, 10 Feb 2018
beautiful observation in this London - I particularly like those first few lines
Read full commentPosted in Indelible
I love your animated writing
Posted on Tue, 06 Feb 2018
I love your animated writing style Elsie - brings the whole thing to life - and the school description rings more than a few bells as I went to somewhere similar (until 'asked to leave'). Very much looking forward to part three!
Read full commentPosted in Les Rowse, Philippe and I Part 2
What an interesting mix of
Posted on Fri, 02 Feb 2018
What an interesting mix of things you have this piece Elsie. I'm waiting with bated breath to find out about Philippe!
Read full commentPosted in Les Rowse, Philippe and I
This is a little gem of a
Posted on Mon, 22 Jan 2018
This is a little gem of a poem!
Read full commentPosted in Breaking The Silence
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