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I have 17 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 521454 times and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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2373 of my comments have received 2424 Great Feedback votes

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Firstly I really liked the

Posted on Wed, 14 Feb 2018

Firstly I really liked the way in which you ended this - because I was expecting them all to crash, and you don't really think about the 'almost' do you - so the detailed description of just before the crash was brilliant, as was the way in which...

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Posted in Man, Son, SatNav, Bus - Part 2

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You had me right there on the

Posted on Tue, 13 Feb 2018

You had me right there on the porch with you. I like the quiet contemplative style of this poem - well done, and welcome back!

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Posted in A Message In A Bottle

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beautiful observation in this

Posted on Sat, 10 Feb 2018

beautiful observation in this London - I particularly like those first few lines

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Posted in Indelible

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I love your animated writing

Posted on Tue, 06 Feb 2018

I love your animated writing style Elsie - brings the whole thing to life - and the school description rings more than a few bells as I went to somewhere similar (until 'asked to leave'). Very much looking forward to part three!

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Posted in Les Rowse, Philippe and I Part 2

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