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beautifully done
Posted on Thu, 09 Nov 2017
beautifully done
Read full commentPosted in Beautiful Angel
Edited or not, this is
Posted on Thu, 02 Nov 2017
Edited or not, this is shaping up very well. Lots of detail in this part, but you've managed to present it in a way that keeps this reader's interest!
Read full commentPosted in The Eden Sky - 3 - An Auspicious Day
An interesting think-piece
Posted on Sat, 21 Oct 2017
An interesting think-piece Tom, thank you for posting it
Read full commentPosted in A Mustard Seed and the Kingdom of Heaven
painfully raw
Posted on Sat, 07 Oct 2017
painfully raw
Read full commentPosted in .12 wet dreams
This is stunningly beautiful
Posted on Sun, 17 Sep 2017
This is stunningly beautiful Di - it reads like an impressionist painting - so yes, a bit of work needed, but all the better for it. I've been to a few places like this and I know exactly what you mean. A brilliant pick
Read full commentPosted in time travelling
Some really interesting
Posted on Sun, 27 Aug 2017
Some really interesting twists and turns in this piece, and I'd love to read another part of it ( I hope there's more to come?)
If you're looking for suggestions, here's one big thing: Are you saying that the 8yr old thought he could lay...
Read full commentPosted in Bringing Charlie Back (Rewrite)
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Posted on Wed, 23 Aug 2017
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Read full commentPosted in Eliza
A great word picture, and the
Posted on Wed, 23 Aug 2017
A great word picture, and the metaphors are strong, never too contrived. Well done
Read full commentPosted in Eliza
Very interesting Elsie - a
Posted on Sun, 20 Aug 2017
Very interesting Elsie - a kind of mix of social history and your own personal history. I remember listening to something on radio four - I'm sure it was more recent than 30 years ago - about how many holocaust survivors were only recently...
Read full commentPosted in Outcomes of my Dad's recent Funeral in London
You've managed the dialogue
Posted on Wed, 16 Aug 2017
You've managed the dialogue between Jack and his mum beautifully - very believable, both the spoken and unspoken bits.
One small suggestion:
'he knew it must be late but he daren’t check the time on his phone'
should probably...
Read full commentPosted in Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down (part 7)
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