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I have 17 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 539302 times and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2447 of my 15,446 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2499 votes

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2447 of my comments have received 2499 Great Feedback votes

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if it makes you feel any

Posted on Thu, 03 May 2018

if it makes you feel any better, I spelt Tuesday wrong until about 5 years ago 

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Posted in Romance Killer

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Love this little moment in

Posted on Thu, 03 May 2018

Love this little moment in time. It reminds me of that strange glow colour photos used to have in the sixites and seventies. 

One small suggestion - I think it's 'puts paid to'  instead of 'pay'

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Posted in Romance Killer

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echoing airyfairy here, both

Posted on Thu, 26 Apr 2018

echoing airyfairy here, both parts such a good read, perfectly paced with believable characters and dialogue. Quite disappointed to hear you don't have plans to continue this - is there anything we can do to twist your arm? (I want to know what...

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Posted in Something Hard Inside Him (Part 2)

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I am hooked! Onto the next

Posted on Thu, 26 Apr 2018

I am hooked! Onto the next part..

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Posted in Something Hard Inside Him (Part 1)

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Very pleased to see this has

Posted on Sat, 14 Apr 2018

Very pleased to see this has been made our daily pick - extremely well deserved for its original approach - well done!

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Posted in Under the hood

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Some brilliant lines in this

Posted on Sun, 01 Apr 2018

Some brilliant lines in this Kilb

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Posted in Alternative Prayer of Remembrance, Easter 2018

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this reads really well Di - I

Posted on Fri, 09 Mar 2018

this reads really well Di - I especially love this line:

Up the hill

seagulls pearl grey wheel wide winged carving time

into slivers of wonder at their grace

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Posted in Walking home from shopping 8/3/18

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I think you must have got cut

Posted on Tue, 06 Mar 2018

I think you must have got cut off by our word limit TKMaxx. If there's more, perhaps you could split this into two equal shorter parts. I hope you do because people prefer to read shorter pieces on a screen and this is really worth reading. It's...

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Posted in Daniel 2016.

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I've read all three parts of

Posted on Fri, 02 Mar 2018

I've read all three parts of this and the intricate detail and local colour really shine through. The dialogue is lively and the characters are beginning to emerge as believable people.

If you're looking for suggestions:

- It really...

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Posted in Fifteen Chapter 1 (part3)

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I hope your snow will

Posted on Fri, 02 Mar 2018

I hope your snow will disappear soon Camilla. I am also stuck here and it's driving me bananas, but I'm painting the insides of cupboards, and windows which is quite soothing and stops me from thinking about the fact that the heating oil is...

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Posted in Housebound

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